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Happy Mother's Day!

Dedicated to all my lovely Atthes!

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Happy Mother's Day!
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My dear Father has four sisters

I'm so lucky to have four aunties

All four of them are very gifted

Their personality comes in varieties

~~~

First, we have Auntie Thiruchelvy

Her heart is as soft as the cloud

Even if her burdens are so heavy

She will never complain out aloud

~~~

Next, we have Auntie Thilagavathy

She is the epitome of discipline

Her diet is always so healthy

And her siblings call her Cheen

~~~

Auntie Vasanthi is in line next

To all of us, she's definitely a role model

If you need a lawyer, she's the best

Her achievements can be written into a novel

~~~

Lastly, we have Auntie Arputhamani

Whenever we get to meet each other

Everything would suddenly seem so funny

We would always be bursting with laughter

~~~

I would like to wish all four of you

To experience a very Happy Mother's Day

An 'I Love You' from me has been long overdue

May God make all your problems go away

~~~

I LOVE YOU, SELVI ATTHE, CHEEN ATTHE, VAS ATTHE AND MANI ATTHE! ❤️😘💐
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran

My mental health decline brought about a lot of darkness and I embraced it. It now flows out mostly as Dark Stories and Poetry.

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  • The Invisible Writerabout a month ago

    Your Aunties sound awesome. Great tribute and poem for them Dharr

  • Denise E Lindquist3 months ago

    Lovely tribute!❤️ I love the poetry and rhyme!💖

  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    I love this!! Such a beautiful tribute to family and all the ladies that helped raise you!! I hear you were a handful so this is a beautiful way to thank them and wish them well!! Great work D!!

  • Novel Allen11 months ago

    Oh wow! Dhar wrote a love song to the atthes. Told you there was a kitty kat down real deep down inside, whenever the lioness is sleeping. 🤣🥰

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    How did I miss this beautiful poem. I hearted ♥️

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    I loved this! My father had five sisters who are all gone now (so is he, along with all of his brothers). One of his sisters was like a second mother to me and I was close with all the others. I was also like a second mother to my nephew. I love that you wrote a Mother’s Day poem to them. Not everyone understands how important non-immediate family bonds can be.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Lovely!!!

  • Perfect poem for your Aunts! I bet they loved it! ❤️

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautiful tribute to your aunties.

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