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#Abecedarian Challenge

By Heather HublerPublished 4 months ago β€’ Updated 4 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - January 2024
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always is my love for you,

bare beneath the moon, a

cadence singing softly as the

day drifts to dusky bloom.

evergreens bow down to us,

forever our hearts do pledge,

gossamer and stardust

hewn from galaxy's milky edge; yet

in my dreams you wander, my

jaded heart burns with righteous pain

knowing you won't return to me,

lies offered in vows now stained.

mindless, all-consuming rage and

never-ending woe, have

overwhelmed this ravaged soul,

please wake me, let me go!

quell these urges, dark and brutal

release the chains that bind, for

somewhere in this hateful haze

true love still gleams and shines.

unrepentant I will find you, waxing

velvet words to soothe the ache, with

wordless supplications holding

xyris sprung from tears and marshy lake

yield to me, oh demon dreams; let gentle

zephyrs sail me safely back to your embrace.

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Thank you so much for spending your time with me :)

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  • The Dani Writer4 months ago

    Wow, this is extraordinary! Well penned Heather and congratulations on well-deserved recognition.

  • This is a beautiful poem, and it flows so perfectly. Fantastic job!

  • JBaz4 months ago

    I just had to come back and re read this….beautiful.

  • Gina C.4 months ago

    So, so gorgeous. This poem is exceptional! Glittery, gauzy, just lovely. You are so, so talented, my friend!

  • Kristen Balyeat4 months ago

    Wow, Heather, this is beyond incredible! I'm obsessed with this gorgeous work of art! I didn't even realize it was the ABC format until the end. Skillfully done, my friend. Wonderful!

  • Natasha Collazo4 months ago

    Girl. YES πŸ‘

  • Tushar17704 months ago

    . "This poem is a beautiful dance of words, each line gracefully stepping into the next, creating a rhythm that resonates with the soul."

  • Novel Allen4 months ago

    OHHH! This is so lovely. Such depths of pain cursing the giver, yet offering great hope to a heart finding again it's true pathway. Beautiful. Congrts.

  • Gorgeous! Congrats on the TS!

  • Holly Pheni4 months ago

    Beautiful, lyrical, and deeply felt story! Congratulations on top story too!

  • Jess Boyes4 months ago

    So beautiful and dreamy. I really loved it and congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Tracy Kreuzburg 4 months ago

    A lovely, lyrical poem!

  • Cathy Deslippe4 months ago

    Congratulations you truly are an inspiration to me. Beautifully written,

  • Dana Crandell4 months ago

    Beautifully crafted! This one is a real contender, Lil' Sis! Congratulations on Top Story, and good luck!

  • Lamar Wiggins4 months ago

    Very dreamlike. You really set the bar high. I mean really high with this flawless performance! 😍😍😍

  • Melissa Ingoldsby4 months ago

    Gorgeous and raw πŸ”₯πŸ’•

  • Daphsam4 months ago

    πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘Congratulations on top story!

  • Denise E Lindquist4 months ago

    Wow!! Well-deserved top story!πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

  • asim mujahid4 months ago

    excellent work ,

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    I am blown away by the few entries I’ve read where I don’t even notice the abcs, hah, and yours is one of these! Elegant and appears effortless. How do you get your images etc or do they just flow forth? I’m so use to the free verse so any kind of rhyme and structure is daunting. Tips please. πŸ˜πŸ˜†

  • Aaliyah Madison4 months ago

    Congratulations to TS

  • Paul Stewart4 months ago

    Back to say congrats on Top Story!

  • Andrew Zuk4 months ago

    Congratulations πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸ’—

  • sleepy drafts4 months ago

    Wow! This is gorgeous! Absolutely brilliant. I love the melodic rhythm.πŸ’—

  • JBaz4 months ago

    I think every one said what we all think. This is truly one of those poems that extends past the norm and becomes unique. Congratulations

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