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Feeling like a place

You are set up that way

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Feeling like a place
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It’s like all the feelings in one place,

A place that is open and closed,

And no drink limits,

A place that requires you to

Do nothing,

But presents

everything to you.

Dreaming about a place,

A place to go,

Where there is nowhere to go,

Or

Somewhere to be.

Time in a box,

Or a clock tells me the time,

It doesn’t ever change by holding the time,

Just by presenting it in a physical form,

And I hold the box inside of me,

A heart.

My heart is a place I go,

No one can go there,

And yet,

It’s open to you.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos,

I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels

The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

The Job, The Space between Us and Atonement published by JMS Books this year!!

Carnivorous published by Eukalypto

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  • Marcus Ten Low2 years ago

    Melissa, hello. I love the freedom and irony and ambiguity you expressed in this poem. I loved lines like "And no drink limits", which transcends the limits of ordinary life. Thank you!

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