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Estrella, Luna and Sol

In Eclipse Challenge

By Paul StewartPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
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Estrella, Luna and Sol
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Estrella was transfixed in the sky as day briefly, swiftly, faded to night, as she swayed, watching

Celestial partners, Sol and Luna, waltzed, as Luna's shadow embraced Sol's radiance

leaving Estrella breathless and burning with passion as she followed their lead and danced along with them to the sound of

I'll Stand By You

People gathered below and joined Estrella, Luna and Sol

Swaying in the night sky, giving themselves unto the moment

Ever hopeful it would never end

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: Estrella means Star in Spanish, and Luna and Sol are Latin for Moon and Sun. There you go.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    Now I know what Estrella means! I like how this one is positive rather than downbeat like a lot of eclipse entries. Just checking- did you mean “transfixed” in the first line Paul? I think a stray L may have snuck in there🤗

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oh I knew Estrella was a Spanish name but I had no idea it meant Star. Loved your Acrostic!

  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    We do dance with the universe, don't we? love this

  • Jay Kantorabout a month ago

    Ps ~ Hard to recognize the world as it is today ~ Jk

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is lovely. Well done, my friend.

  • Michelle Liewabout a month ago

    Lovely celestial dance, Paul, bravo!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Little bit of magic.

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