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Dusk in the Fragrant Village

- Bottlenecked Yearnings

By Dawnxisoul393artPublished 7 days ago 1 min read

We met in the village

as dusk settled in

Frogs leaping and bounding

a symphony within

Honeysuckle's buds

so slender and late

Yearning to bloom

but alas, it's too late

~~~

Like bottlenecks

the path ahead seems unclear

Yet the village in June

its fragrance so dear

You, with skilled hands

carved flowers so fair

Adorning the shackles

that I had to bear

~~~

These flowers, though lovely

cannot be bestowed

Bound by the chains

that my freedom erode

But in this moment

amidst nature's embrace

I find solace and peace

in this quiet place

~~~

The village, a haven

where time seems to halt

Offering respite

from life's heavy assault

Here, in this sanctuary

my soul can take wing

As I dream of the freedom

that tomorrow may bring

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Dawnxisoul393art

Couple from HK. Dr. Daniel K Lam has got his degrees in Anglia Ruskin University, Cambridge(ARU has its origins in the Cambridge School of Art, which was opened in 1858 by John Ruskin), Doris H Lam has graduated from GFAA with MFA degree.

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