Dionysian Dancer
An Ekphrastic Abecedarian
A barbaric insult to your sacred sovereignty was his summons
Beauty, as Kant reminds us, is a source of disinterested pleasure
Can I possibly do justice to the extent of the pleasure your brute being bestows upon me?
Dionysus, born from the thigh of Zeus, doyen of drunkenness, expert in ecstasy
Evoked you from the opaque ocean of oblivion
For the sake of this fumbler with pigments and brushes?
Grotesque were his rudeness and his presumption!
How did he dare to dabble in the domain of demons and deities?
In cases like this, one wonders if the phrase “great man” is an oxymoron
Just look at the elegant arabesques of your horns
Knowledge of the sort you must possess is rare and precious as sapphires
Loping through grove and glade, kissed by moonlight and susurrating with secrets
Murmuring a language older than any human ear
Never uncertain of purpose or aim, for a god made you for dancing
Over all of this, he looked with ambitious and covetous eyes
Painter, sculptor, thief of mysteries whose nature he could only guess at
Questing not after understanding, but glory—by what borrowed, eldritch charm did he call you?
Reticent, even bashful is your countenance; how filthy was the floor your downcast eyes touched?
Stupid hubris was the circle he caught you in, to be his object
Tell me that Paris was not a haughty harlot with hellish halitosis when he tore you from the forest
Under his gaze were you diminished, enslaved, commodified
Vile as all of this was, please accept that your sad, stubborn majesty remains
Whoever gazes at this rendering of your radical, regal difference will taste its primordial pungency
Xenophiles will outnumber the stars as eyes trace your taught copper curls
You show that what is strange is what is beautiful
Zealots of Bacchus must have brought Euripides to watch you dance his tragedy into being
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (14)
Congrats on making the list DJ!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win!! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congrats on runner up!!! How exciting🥳
Amazing concept and top notch execution! Congrats!
Elegantly written and highly evocative! A marvelous piece! Congratulations on the well-earned recognition!
This really does work for me!
“Loping through grove and glade, kissed by moonlight and susurrating with secrets” is a wonderful image, and your words flow so well that you could forget it’s an Abecedarian! I like the softly accusatory tone in this. Well done 👏🏾
This is powerful writing! Congratulations!
Once again you prove your creativity and talent. Congratulations
I finally know what ekphrastic means, thanks. I feel so learned just reading this. Very scholarly and interesting words. I have been schooled to the gods.
Hellish halitosis 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 That cracked me up! I echo what Hannah said below, this was very elegant and poignant!
Very elegant. Lavish.
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