broken record apologies
Something I'm trying to stop...poem
broken rere
cord apologies
just another chance
to hurt and harm
again and again
rinse repeat, refresh, reboot
rinse repeat, again, again
broken rere
cord apologies
g litc~~~hes in the matrix
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anomalies
meaningless, as always
unless the pattern is b ro~~~ken
###
rinse repeat, refresh, reboot
rinse repeat, again, again
broken rere~#~
cord apologies
reruns of nostalgic sorrys
the same old same old
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Author's Notes: Broken record apologies is something I've done a lot in the past. Trying to stop that and move forward with meaningful apologies that come with real change.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Comments (18)
I love the structure of this... it makes it all the more powerful
e.e. cummings, call your office. ;)
OH wow, I love this! Such an important message, and the way you wrote the broken record voice into this was freakin awesome! This is a work of art with a really meaningful lesson woven in. A good piece to sit with. Bravo, pal!
Perfectly captured, Paul. And yes, once again I resonate completely with this.
The layout, the words…everything works with this Paul
Dharrsheena nailed it!
I loved this Paul! ❤️ Well done!!
You captured exactly how it feels to be told “sorry” by someone all the time. It’s why I tell people, don’t say “sorry”, apologize and change. Otherwise it’s just words
Oooo, I love the glitchy effects you made here to represent the broken record! Also, so happy to know you're moving past this! Go Sir Paul! 🍩🥐
Paul this is so creative and clever. Truly, well done!
Really cool writing, loved it 🙂
This is clever. Authentic and outside the box. I like it. 😁
Again I love the alliteration and assonance as well as the stuttering rhythm of the poem in keeping with idea of glitch’s in the matrix. But this time you employ the always potent re-words instead of for and from: rerecord, rinse, repeat, refresh, reboot. The parallel that you are drawing to negative repetitive apologies and modern technology reminds me of gears grinding in an emotional/mechanical transmission. I agree with Joe, this is Top Story (poem?) stuff. Great work!
Deserves to be top story.
Good to express it. Makes it tangible. Gives it power. Always good to read your stuff.
Apologies with actions work well though. Good poem.
I mean, the content makes it seem an inappropriate comment, but what a fun form.
Great poem! The repetition throughout created good flow and was of course a great fit for the subject matter! Cool image too!