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for Hannah Moore's Yugen - a Community Renga

By Heather HublerPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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This was written as a continuation in Hannah Moore's brilliant community Renga. My part is 7-7.

Here is the compilation piece:

And the next link provides her wonderful background on this idea and the 'instructions'.

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Tender memories strewn o'er

silken soil, weep farewell tears

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Thank you, Hannah, for such an incredibly inspiring collaboration opportunity!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, this waa so nostalgic and poignant. Loved your lines!

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a month ago

    I don't know why, but this reminded me of my old Pokémon Nintendo games that I played a lot as a kid. I booted up my first DS cartridge and I swear to goodness that thing was like a time capsule. Going through all of those Pokémon reminded me of all of the memories I built with that game and the friends and family that I shared those memories with.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Epic word choice! Great 7-7 addition!

  • Jay Kantorabout a month ago

    'h' ~ Arigato ~ 'j'

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Oh these words are so beautiful, Hubler. Well done on your first entry into this stunning Renga! :)

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Lovely! How perfect. This poem, this Renga, is sooo goooood. Loving it.

  • Kendall Defoe about a month ago

    I fee like jumping into this pool.

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    “Silken soil” is a lovely turn of phrase Heather, and you’ve carried over the same notes as the rest of the Renga before you🤗

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    Thank you, its beautiful!

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