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My closest friend these days

By MissclickedPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2023

I have this thing in me

people call it








sometimes my heart forgets its functions

stops, slows and races for some reasons

air rushes in and out

no words to figure-out

the stomach adds to the show

forges its anger, all in a row

my mind acts cool though

it goes numb

like there's no way to go

my last two brain cells in a corner

figure things out like a foreigner

At the last, I surrender

to my own weapons

it's scary, those 60 seconds

yet before I rest my case

let me embrace my face

it's the only one that acts the same

no eyebrow arches

no folds on the skin

no discoloration

not even a hint

like a close friend

keeps the secret till the end


I have this thing in me

people call it








vintagesurreal poetrysad poetryinspirationalhumorheartbreak

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Hey fella! welcome to my blog or you could say a little window into my thoughts. Here I will be writing about various topics like, life experiences, short fictions, poems and sometimes a little insights to my life. I hope we all get along!

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  • M10 months ago

    Thank you for writing this. Such a beautiful flow!

  • Dana Stewart10 months ago

    I felt this and have noticed that I get relief when I realize everything does not have to be done instantly. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Grz Colm10 months ago

    I hear that - great job Missclicked!! 😊

  • MARIE ODEMS 10 months ago


  • Love the pic and the poem Well done very impressive

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Very well put. Excellent poem

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Pure and authentically expressed!!! Congratulations on Top!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Tiffany Gordon 10 months ago

    Fabulous work!

  • Kimmiekins410 months ago

    I love this <3

  • Amazing Piece📝👌❤️Congratulations on Your Top Story🎉

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    Well, that was crafty and relatable. Thank you for sharing. And congrats on your Top Story!

  • Novel Allen10 months ago

    Wow! So proud I nominated you in the Raise your voice. Congrats, so well deserved Top Story.

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    Coming back to say congrats on top story!

  • Naomi Gold10 months ago

    I had anxiety so bad I was pulled out of high school by my doctor, so I know the feeling all too well. Fortunately I rarely get it now. Just when something big is about to happen, good or bad. Congrats on your first Top Story, and here’s to many more! 🥂

  • Gerald Holmes10 months ago

    "my last two brain cells in a corner, figure things out like a foreigner." Sometimes a line from a writers mind reaches out and demands that you read it again and again until it digs deep down inside you and moves you somehow. This is Poetry at its best and you have done that here!! Congrats on a well deserved Top Story. You have a new subscriber.

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    This is inctedible and so relatable and meant to read it sooner, glad I read it today. Congrats on an awesome Top Story!

  • Omggg this was so relatable! You nailed anxiety perfectly!

  • Novel Allen10 months ago

    A lot of that going around these days. Breathe in, breathe out, walk, run dance laugh cry joyfully. Different things work for diff folks, just pick one and go.

  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    Thank you!

  • Jazzy 10 months ago

    RELATE 🥲

  • Sid Aaron Hirji10 months ago

    Ya the insomnia that comes with it. Sometimes you just have to fall apart and then restart

  • Mariann Carroll10 months ago

    Anxiety is definitely a deception. It’s a battlefield we have to conquer

  • Eshita Bhati10 months ago

    Can relate here badly👀

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