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Abecedarian Creek

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By Atomic HistorianPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Abecedarian Creek
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A

babbling brook

careening

down

every

facet of the

gorge

Hurrying on

its

journey

Kicking rocks out of its way

Life springing up along its shores

Mice and

newts scurry about

Over into

ponds it spills where

quacking ducks reside

Rolling over tops of dams and

sliding under bridges

to

unforetold lands

Venturing near and far

Winding its way for

xoloitzcuintles to sip from it

Yonder more it etches its path into the earth, continuing to

Zoom on by, only to empty into the ocean at its end

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Comments (7)

  • Joe O’Connor5 months ago

    Love the rapid flow to mimic the water, and "Kicking rocks out of its way" is such a great line! Nice:)

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    The flow of this (for lack of a better word) works very well to mirror your subject! 👏

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Beautiful piece. Very nicely done.

  • Daphsam5 months ago

    You wrote this so beautifully.

  • Mariann Carroll5 months ago

    I felt I was on the journey, nicely done🏆

  • You had me at "babbling brook", Atomic. I enjoyed every word of this as it washed over me. And I'm guessing you had a lot of fun using the word "xoloitzcuintles"! Pretty impressive.

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Fantastic!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕

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