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Abandoned Heart


By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Abandoned Heart
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I left your phone,

On the side of the Bed, where you nodded off 💤

Lonely Sentiments were located in my Mentality -

The ones you sowed…

How could you, be so inquisitive,

Nowadays Empty?

The reason for Heartbreak ❤️‍🩹 Philosophies is the Power of Love ❤️.

Leave my heart but don't

You break it-💔

Limitations are heavy

So you can’t

Haul it…

Alone I pose

Inside my senses,


Desolate and weeping,

How could you leave me?

It was not the imperfections,

It was the fables,

You used To beguile me…

I rather you leave

Than to probe

For Reasons.

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  • Catherine Nyomenda2 months ago

    I rather you leave than probe for reasons.. Eye catchy! Amazing Loui

  • So heartfelt! I was impressed!

  • Naveed2 months ago

    That was exceptionally well written. I was thoroughly impressed and enjoyed it immensely❤️❤️

  • Darkos2 months ago

    Beautiful and touching❤️❤️

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  • JBaz2 months ago

    once again you manage to make me want to learn how to write like this.

  • Veronica Coldiron2 months ago

    Heartfelt and sad...but beautiful, too. LOVELY poem!!

  • Cendrine Marrouat2 months ago

    Nice one!

  • Rasma Raisters2 months ago

    Wonderfully written.

  • 🥹❤️‍🩹📝🥹❤️‍🩹📝🥹❤️‍🩹📝🥹❤️‍🩹📝

  • This was awesome! Loved the way it flowed to a natural stop at the end.

  • Berry Driven2 months ago

    Wow, so vivid. Touched me with the three lines at the end, I'd rather you leave, than to probe for reasons.

  • Oh God this was so heartbreaking! Loved your poem!

  • Lena Folkert2 months ago

    Just the latest in the works of the brilliant Handsomelouii!! Fantastically done, my friend!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Beautifully written. Well done.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Heartbreaking!!! Beautifully written!!! Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Real Poetic2 months ago

    The ending was so intense. I felt every word of this poem. ✍🏽👏🏼👏🏼🩵

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Fantastic writing Lil bro! I wish heartbreak didn't exist...

  • Mother Combs2 months ago

    This is wonderful, Handsome.

  • I've read this over several times now, once even backwards, line by line, & I'm still not quite sure what is happening or has happened. Has the other left physically, emotionally, psychologically, spiritually or is it the fear they will that is causing you to abandon them? All of which seems completely apropos for someone feeling abandoned. The final lines are what bring it all together for me: "I rather you leave Than to probe For Reasons."

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