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Eclipse

An acrostic poen

By Jackmiko99Published about a month ago 1 min read
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Longing squeezes the soul

Without the moon at the edge of the universe

The heart's lament grows restless

Screaming loudly but unheard

Street flowers in the dimness

Curling up sadly in the embrace of the night

Oh.... Night eclipse

Silent, desolate, carving memories of betrayal

Cold wind shrouded in darkness

My will is fulfilled

Eyes dimming

Drifting into sleep as the night arrives

nature poetry
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Jackmiko99

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  • Anna about a month ago

    So beautiful and soft! Well written poem, great job!😊

  • Manisha Dhalaniabout a month ago

    Gorgeous lines. Well done!

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