A spring Time Love🌸
I remember our story was like Rain that falls in love with the sunshine...
I felt lucky,
When I saw a🐞 Ladybug...
It all started to happen instantaneously.
Like Flowers, you Blossomed into my life
Underneath the sunlight...
Who Ever would have known
That one kiss would change my whole life...
I smelled the Freshness of the Rain, as I watched the anticipation grow in your eyes...
What is Love? the only thing on my mind.
Is This Love?
Growing initiatives savor time.
We are Alone in your Playground,
Trapped inside a Garden where I can only smell your Flowers.
A Trace of Your Love Lingered from Above and Beyond the Walls of My Heart...
I Cascaded my emotions and you watched as my Love sprout like Daisies...
Simplicity Love-
You Reminded me of a Sunflower, but
carried the Energy of a Rose...
A SPRINGTIME LOVE
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Comments (18)
Lonzo, this was a really nice poem. I love the imagery you used. The lines that spoke to me most were "You Reminded me of a Sunflower, but carried the Energy of a Rose..." I took that as this person has a beautiful, bright personality but carries themselves with the elegance and class of rose. Such a great metaphor!
What a wonderful poem. I'm so glad I've discovered your work!
"I felt lucky | When I saw a Ladybug" Love this line. Gorgeous work. 💖
Beautiful work as always!
Absolutely beautiful.🌸
Your words write the path to so many places. Great read. Thank you
Gosh you painted such a beautiful picture with your words!
This is very lovely! Nicely woven words, friend!🌻
Beuatiful as always
Such sweet thoughts, loved the idea of this!! Wonderful work :)
Simply Divine Lil bro! May we all be blessed with a love like this! BRAVO!
I have read quite a few poems from you. This one is my favorite! The writing flows effortlessly!
Beautifully written! Keep it up!
I love this poem 🌻🌸🌹🥰
This is just gorgeous. Well done, as usual.
Your heartfelt words beautifully capture the essence of a blossoming love story. Well done!!!💕🥰
And will springtime burst forth into a glorious & fruitful summer?
So effortlessly beautiful and sweet! Well done, Lonzo!