Writing in The Dark 🔦 📝
Can You Feel My Emotions all over the Room...
I smeared my sentiments
All over the door
So once it is shut
I don't have to cry anymore...
I scribble devotion
All over my walls,
So when the lights go out
I won't be sole...
I'm Writing in the dark
Guided by the light in my heart...
Teardrops on my pillow,
And my sanity
Was wrapped in my sheets...
I scribbled devotion
On the walls...
So I wouldn't be alone,
when you flee...
I lay in bed tapping
The screen...
In the Dark
So that you may not see...
The Tears Strolling down my
Cheeks,
as I'm writing
My symphony 📝...
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Comments (16)
Powerful ✴️✴️✴️
And the darkness becomes the mask we wear when no other will suffice, that no one might see how much we hurt.
Oh, Lonzo, so much of this resonates and hits home. I love it all, but these lines especially struck me … ‘I'm Writing in the dark Guided by the light in my heart...’ and … ‘I lay in bed tapping The screen... In the Dark So that you may not see... The Tears Strolling down my Cheeks’ Absolutely wonderful 💕🙂
A beautifully poignant poem, Lonzo. Well done!
This was so sad! 😭 Very well done!
This is so beautiful 🥰🥰🥰🥰
Beautiful
Sentimental piece!! Really beautiful!!🥰🙌💕
OH Lonzo. This is sadly divine. Calls for hugs and lots of alcohol, or prayer, whichever is desired. I send 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Damn, this is real beautiful Lonzo
😔 A sad but nice poem Lonzo. 👍
This is excellent. Well done.
Striking imagery of writing on the walls and doors in grief! So emotional. Wow, I loved this one!
So poignantly beautiful (and hey look, notifications are working, I usually miss when you post)
Very evocative, an exceptional poem!
Oh, I felt this heavily in my heart; this was beautiful; thank you for sharing.