I can melt for hours into your purple laughter
And sink further into your yellow song
Your glistening and adventurous brown eyes
Give me the feeling like I actually belong
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From the very first moment, in which I arrived
The friendship you've given has helped me survive
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I can listen intently to the orange stories you tell
I can always listen to the soft pink sound of your voice
As you're beautiful brown waves of hair frame your face
Being your daughter is my favorite choice
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From the very first moment, in which I knew,
Everything snapped into focus, it's quite easy loving you
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I can easily comprehend your blue wisdom
It's so easy falling into the light red glow of your heart
When your olive skin holds me so close
I'm glad to know that we're never really apart
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From the very first moment, that you became my mom
When everything went crazy, you helped me to remain calm
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I just want to give you a violet 'thank you'
Because you offered bright sunlight when things were gray
You were my very first colorful love story
And I can proudly still call you my best friend to this day
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I love you forever, you really are amazing
Even with all of us rascals that you were raising
About the Creator
S. G. Marin
I'm optimistic, married, a mom, a writer, a reader, an artist. Being only thirty years young, I want to be a published author when I grow up. I hope to help heal the world with my words, for they are quite powerful when used correctly.
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