A Neverending Wind
Arid Challenge Entry
Archeologists recently discovered this piece written by an unknown source, while excavating in the Savannah:
"I was carried on a neverending wind
Blown from north to south, east to west
From pole to pole, I was carried
No set course or destination
I was carried on a promise
Promise of changing seasons, changing plains
Through the densest forests and deepest valleys
Up the highest mountains and across the vast oceans
My journey began on a chance encounter in the vortex
And so it continued across many miles and terrains
With no end in sight
Staying only for a short time wherever I made landfall
Beautiful, entrancing places of unmatched glory
Heartbreaking, sad, war-torn lands without glory
Sacred, scenic secrets and popular, picturesque paradises
From Spring to Summer, Autumn and Winter
I travelled, explored, experienced and enjoyed
Enduring the harshest climates, both hot and cold
Feeling the sting of the frozen landscapes of Antarctica
Cleansed by the refreshing rainfall of Scotland and Seattle
Blown from here to there
Sometimes by a whisper
Often by a jet stream
Flying high above the Earth below
and low enough to feel the dirt, water, grass and concrete on my face
My travels took me through the rainforests
Where I chanced glances at the varied fauna and flora
The winds of change never stopped
Slowed right down at times
But never stopped
So slow, I could feel the breath of the people I passed in my travels
Feel their pains, their suffering, their successes, loves, losses, gains
and sometimes deaths
The winds of change never stopped
Taking me faster than eagles and planes, over volcanos active and dormant
Through city parks and concrete jungles
In the dark and the light
From sunrise to sunset
Up to the highest highs and lowest lows
Where the Earth speaks
Speaks of its own joys, sadness, loves, hates, successes and losses
Never a moment to spare, as the wind takes me here and there
That neverending wind that carries me
From pole to pole
Hemisphere to hemisphere
North to south
East to west
As I get a glimpse, a mere snapshot of life on the blue planet
Of children, men, women, all races, religions
The spirit of humanity
The evil of humanity
The good in some, bad in others
The sense of adventure, of learning
The importance of love
My travels are lessons in all of the above and so much more
Lessons in what it is to be
Alive
Present
On this world so vast and bursting
with a spectrum of colours, emotions, textures, sounds, smells and tastes
So much time is spent by so many
worrying
fighting
So many choose pain instead of pleasure
Choose hate instead of love
I know when the time comes
When my journey ends
I will cherish the memories
Of the adventure
The neverending winds have taken me on
Through lands of green, waters so blue
Through many harsh and unforgiving places
Both naturally and manmade
The brightest and warmest of hearts
The darkest and coldest of minds
I've seen the overachievers, the triers
Those that prey on others, both man and beast
Those that fight for others, rights and lives
I can feel the wind is slowing down
It's leading me to my final destination
The journey's drawing to a close
The adventure's nearing it's end
My life, will be but a memory in the wind
Soon
Time is never enough
Time is always short
Time, though, is what you make of it
Time, can work to your favour
Use time well
Explore
...
Engulfed in the desert's parched silence, I was nothing but another grain of sand in the wind
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Probably the last entry to the Arid Challenge, which you can read more about below...wanted to try something a little different.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!
https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com
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Comments (8)
This one almost sobered me up. Like D I too love that you took a different approach through verse! Brilliant. Liked the feel of it and the idea of exploring everything like a little kid, like we all should be in life! Beautiful work and another inspiring poem too! Iβve written something in verse, like a mini story too but itβs not edited.. not for arid.. just similar vein to what Iβd been writing about recently. Where are you up to now with your long form epistolary narrative?
Whoaaaaa! Sir Paul, this blew my mind! I love the direction you went with! It was very profound, poetic and Paulitical!! π©π₯
You old wind bag! ππππ
Beautiful.
This is beautifully done "Sometimes by a whisper. Often by a jet stream" Loved this lines particularly π€
Another masterpiece from the pen of the Poet. I enjoyed the adventure and the break form the norm on interpreting the prompt. Well done, pal!
great entry idea! well written
An entire spectrum. Very good. Fyi there's a typo in line 6.