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A Farewell to Hair

For Paul's Unofficial Remix Challenge

By Dana CrandellPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read

The hair I had has up and left

Replaced by a smooth, slick surface

With dings, dents and bumps.

The hats I wore for fashion

Now prevent sunburn, mostly.

Those who say bald is beautiful

Have never looked under the hats.

Farewell, thick, blond mop

With that flamboyant flip -

Unruly, uncontrollable

And now so missed.

Only the stubborn sides remain,

Leaving an airstrip for the mosquitoes.

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A quick, near-last-minute entry to my pal-across-the-pond, Paul's unique challenge, which I'll link to below. It was inspired, in title, at least, by this one from Paul:

For any of you talented, quick thinkers that would like to enter, here's the challenge:

Free VersehumorFor Fun

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Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist

My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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    Written by Dana Crandell