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A City's Mouth

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By Lisa HerdmanPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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We swayed as a group

bumping along the subway's rails,

each in a different stage of awakeness.

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I cuddled down into hard seating,

folding my hands over and over,

an hour of shifting comfort.

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A younger man cradled his guitar,

stickered and colorful casing,

humming to something silent.

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All eyes pointed inward, outward,

some forward and some

looking at nothing.

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Shuffled makeup, lids clicking,

hush of a finished newspaper

zipped into a bag.

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We finally sighed,

gathering gently,

readying feet and arms.

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The city rose from the ground,

lights flashing through slim windows,

a rush over ocean water tracks.

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Steady as brakes ground their teeth,

a platform ready for give and take,

the city screaming through yawning doors.

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Lisa Herdman

I'm learning to be wildly inappropriate, ridiculous, needy - and alive.

Thank you so much for all the support!

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  • Shane Dobbie12 months ago

    This is very good. Subscribed.

  • Circulatory system of the city.

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