Dick Winchester in... Dick Winchester Episode 1: “Gratuity Not Included”
Starring Dick Winchester as Dick “Dick” Winchester
Book 1, Chapter 4
INTRO / A LONE SAXOPHONE MOANS A MOURNFUL NOTE
NARRATOR
A city street caught somewhere between the rock and a place too hard for even the hardest man. Yet, one hard man walks this dead-end street, his shoulders hunched forward beneath his leather jacket. In this town full of losers, a city of shut down strangers and hot rod angels, some want him dead. Even less want him alive. Those few that remain know that it will take more than death to see the last of... Dick Winchester.
DICK looks up into the camera as lightning splits the sky behind him and the music crescendos.
FADE IN
NARRATOR
Tonight’s episode finds Dick at his home base deep within the lawless backstreets of Arlington, Virginia as he and his long-time associate Norm count their latest earnings from their underground food delivery service.
MUSIC FADES OUT
NORM
You didn’t text me back.
DICK
First off, it wasn’t a text. It was a reel you sent me through Instagram. Second off, so what?
NORM
“So what?” You never told me what you think!
DICK [shrugs]
Yeah, it was funny.
NORM [smiling]
You think so?
DICK
Sure.
NORM [smile drops, now suspicious]
Then what was it about?
DICK
Huh?
NORM
What was it about? Since it was so funny, it must have left an impression. So let’s hear it, wise guy.
DICK [rubbing the back of his neck]
I, uh, well...
[points to pile of cash on table in front of them]
Shouldn’t you be counting that?
NORM
Sure, but what does it matter? If you won’t live up to your obligations, why should I live up to mine?
DICK
Because I’m paying you to, jackass.
NORM
Oh, really? That didn’t seem to matter when you ignored my message.
DICK
Because you’re not paying me.
NORM [sniffling]
You would say that, wouldn’t you?
DICK
How are you paying me? This is my business. That’s my pile of money. This is my garage.
NORM [looking around]
Wait, really? Didn’t the sign say this was a WeWork?
DICK
You wouldn’t believe the renovations they’ll do if you slam a duffel bag full of cash on the building manager’s desk.
NORM
Unbelievable.
DICK
What?
NORM
You have all this money. All this influence. And yet you still can’t take two seconds to send a few laughing emojis after your friend spent all that time picking out the reel he knew would brighten your day.
[sniffling again]
Sarah was right about you. You’re nothing but a heartless jerk.
DICK
I’m not heartless!
[pauses]
Wait, Sarah was talking about me? What else did she say?
NORM [anguished]
First you tear out my heart, and now you’re changing the subject?!
[begins sobbing into fistful of 20s]
DICK
Ah, Jesus.
[pats NORM’s back]
Hey, don’t do that, pal. I’m sorry. Sometimes I get a bit overwhelmed and I do insensitive things. I loved that reel.
NORM [smiling again]
You did?
DICK
I really did, buddy. Now how’s abouts you and me finish counting up today’s earnings so we can get out of here and get you an ice cream. My treat.
NORM [visibly older than DICK]
Okay, Dad—
DICK
Dick.
NORM
—Dick!
DICK [rifling through dollar bills again]
Can I ask you something, Norm?
NORM
Sure.
DICK
What’s so important about all that stuff, anyway? Aren’t phones just a tool? Why did we let them become our whole lives?
NORM [looks around]
Uh, didn’t you say we should get back to work, boss?
DICK
But I want to know—
NORM [grabs the collar of DICK’s shirt and hisses]
Not. Here.
NORM pulls phone from his pocket and exaggeratedly places it on the table, then looks expectantly at DICK. After a moment, DICK places his phone on the table, and NORM takes him by the arm to the other end of the room.
NORM [whispering furiously]
Are you trying to get me killed?
DICK [at normal volume]
What?
[after a glare from NORM, whispers]
What?
NORM [points to phones]
They’re listening.
DICK
Who? The Feds? You think we’re being wiretapped?
NORM [chuckles sadly]
This goes way higher than that. The government only looks like it’s in control because they allow it.
[points to phones again]
DICK [cocks head]
The phones?
NORM [holding his head in his hand]
Man, Sarah was really right about you.
DICK [perks up]
Sar—
[catches himself]
Listen, Norm, I’ve been bitten by the conspiracy bug once or twice myself, so I get it. But there can’t possibly be an organization more corrupt or nefarious than the U.S. Government. Besides Uber Eats or DoorDash, but that goes without saying.
NORM
You don’t get it. Everyone knows that Google, Facebook, and Angie’s List hold all the power. But they can’t tolerate us pulling back the curtain by talking about it. Look at all these influencers who suddenly decide they’re doing phone-free weekends. Vanished! Never to be heard from again.
DICK [chuckling]
You’re not hearing from them because they don’t have their phones, Norm.
NORM
You’re just another pawn on their chessboard, Dick. We all are. But pawns get knocked off sooner or later. Especially the ones who refuse to play the game.
DICK [walking back to the phone]
The only pawns here are these little pieces of plastic that have to do everything we say, Norm.
[picks up phone]
See? I’m holding the phone and speaking directly to it. Have the shadow brokers come from the fifth dimension to kill me yet?
NORM
Dick. Stop.
DICK
Here, I’ll do you one better.
[to the phone]
Hey, Siri.
SIRI
What can I help you with, Dick?
DICK
Hmm, let’s see. Can you kill me?
SIRI
No.
DICK
See, Norm? It’s just a harmless—
SIRI
Not me.
A heavy knock on the front door. DICK nearly drops the phone, and NORM’s face pales.
DICK [calling out]
Who the hell is it?
KEISHA [from other side of door]
DoorDash.
DICK and NORM draw handguns from their waistbands.
DICK
I didn’t order any.
KEISHA
It says the order is for Norm Kreitzer? From Sarah Wight?
NORM [putting away gun]
Oh, wow. Babe, you shouldn’t have!
[jogs to the door]
DICK [holding up a hand]
No, wait. Don’t—
NORM unlocks the door. It flies open, knocking NORM back. KEISHA and LEANNA step through, KEISHA shoving NORM to the floor while LEANNA brandishes a Thompson submachine gun.
LEANNA [raising Thompson]
Special delivery!
DICK
Shit!
Bullets fly as LEANNA fires from the hip, filling the wall behind DICK with holes. NORM’s fall has unleashed a flurry of dollar bills that were formerly in his hand.
DICK
Noooooo.
Time slows. Dropping his gun, DICK leaps through the air, passing between each bullet as the submachine gun expends individual brass casings with each concussion in the foreground. DICK manages to grab every stray dollar. Then time resumes normal speed as DICK lands on top of NORM.
NORM
Wow, Dick, you really risked your life to shield me?
DICK [glancing at the crumpled bills in his hands]
Uh, yeah. Couldn’t let anything happen to my best friend.
NORM
Friend? Best?
[gasps]
Dad?
DICK
Best friend, that’s my final offer.
KEISHA coughs expectantly.
DICK [gets to his feet]
Oh, sorry. Not very professional.
KEISHA
Hey, I know you!
[turns to LEANNA]
Leanna, you know who this is? It’s Dick Winchester. Man, our bosses really hate you.
DICK
Oh, I’m aware.
[pauses]
Wait, you didn’t know who I was before?
KEISHA
What do you mean?
LEANNA
He thinks our employers ordered a hit on him, Keisha.
KEISHA
Ohhhh.
[laughs]
Nope, just doing our jobs.
DICK
You’re really just DoorDash drivers?
[nods to LEANNA’s Thomspon]
Then what the hell is that doing here?
LEANNA
It’s like you said. We’re DoorDash drivers.
NORM [getting to his feet]
Oh, I heard about this. You’re launching a new service, right?
DICK
How do you know that?
NORM
It was in their latest email. All DashPass members get them.
[seeing DICK’s withering glare]
What?
[realization dawning]
Oh, shit...
DICK
Maybe I shouldn’t be paying you, moron. You know our money comes from us stealing their business, and here you are giving it right back to them!
KEISHA
If you two are quite finished.
DICK [turning back]
Right, sorry. Go on, then.
[closes his eyes and tenses]
KEISHA [pulling out a sheet of paper]
“Please stop hurting my boyfriend’s feelings, Dick, or the next delivery will be full service. From Sarah.”
DICK [opens his eyes]
Wait, you’re not going to shoot me?
LEANNA
Nope, this is our Harass and Intimidate tier.
[grins]
What, you really thought I was that bad of a shot? You didn’t make it easy, I’ll have you know. Having to shoot around a man in midair? Forget about it.
NORM
You’ve got to spring for the Maim and Debilitate tier. That’s the best value for your buck.
KEISHA
You read our brochure!
DICK [to NORM]
I’m about to shoot you myself, you walking DoorDash billboard.
LEANNA [slaps the side of her still smoking Thompson]
If you ever get serious, you know who to call. Though I gotta warn you, we charge by the bullet, and with inflation the way it is, that pile of money may not cover it if you don’t act soon.
DICK
With Biden in charge, it’s probably worthless already.
All laugh, including SIRI.
KEISHA
Funny thing, though. Right before we drove up, Leanna here got an email from an anonymous address saying there was $500K in an anonymized PayPal account if we were willing to accept this proposal on Angie’s List.
DICK
What was the job?
LEANNA
To kill you.
DICK
And you didn’t take it? Hell, I’d kill myself for $500K.
KEISHA
Hey, we’re professionals here. And I don’t get tipped if you’re dead.
[holds out her hand]
DICK
Oh, right.
[counts out the bills he plucked from the air]
How’s 20% sound?
KEISHA [crinkles her nose]
That’s actually 19%.
[winks]
But we’ll call it even for the chance to shoot at a living legend in the Arlington food delivery business.
DICK
I appreciate you and your associate’s style. Here, take my card. In case you ever feel like leaving the corporate life behind.
LEANNA [grinning]
You realize we’d be shot in the kneecaps if we were caught with this, right?
DICK [shrugs]
We’re always looking for fresh talent to join our fast-growing enterprise. Lots of our drivers keep calling out sick with broken limbs.
KEISHA
We’ll be seeing each other, Winchester.
KEISHA and LEANNA exit through the front door. DICK locks it behind them and turns to NORM.
DICK
Well, I guess the only conspiracy here was your girlfriend attempting to shut me up. Though that whole Angie’s List bit is odd, I have to admit.
[seeing NORM hasn’t reacted]
Hello? Earth to Norm?
NORM [to himself]
My baby really cares about my feelings so much that she paid DoorDash drivers to shoot at him. Is this what love feels like?
DICK
I don’t know much, but I know love dies the second DoorDash enters the picture.
NORM
You’re just jealous.
DICK [suddenly defensive]
What, jealous? Who said anything about that? That would imply I wanted your girlfriend for myself. I never said anything about that. Though apparently she talks about me, so if she that were ever to come up in conversation, even as a hypothetical...
[seeing the look on NORM’s face]
So, how about that ice cream, sport?
NORM
Nah, don’t worry about it.
DICK
But I promised.
NORM [holds up phone]
I took care of it.
DICK
Took care of—
[realization dawns]
Oh, don’t tell me, you son of a...
A heavy knock on the front door.
KEISHA [through the door]
DoorDash!
NARRATOR
Join us next week for another thrilling episode as Dick Winchester and his indomitable crew of underground food delivery drivers must navigate the treacherous waters of automotive insurance in... Dick Winchester Episode 2: “Slashed Tires are not Covered Under Your Plan”
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Until then, join Dick on his debut adventure when a package arrives on his front door. No name, no return address, and only the dim outline of an Amazon drone rising into the sky. As the box starts ticking in his hands, will Dick solve the mystery of what the package holds in time?
More Dick Winchester in...
The Opening Salvo (Book 1)
- The Box with No Name
- The Last Word
- The Hat Trick
- Dick Winchester Episode 1: Gratuity Not Included — you are here
- The Terminus — print exclusive*
- The Fairy Tale
- The Cop Out — print exclusive*
- The Enlistment
- The Cliffhanger
- The Cliffhanger, The Prequel
- The Cliffhanger, The Finale
*When the book is released in September 2024
The Counterattack (Book 2)
- Opening chapter: The Deflation
About the Creator
Stephen A. Roddewig
I am an award-winning author from Arlington, Virginia. Started with short stories, moved to novels.
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Comments (4)
I love your subtitle 😂 This is so fun!! It NEEDS to be turned into a show; I'd watch it in a heartbeat. So action-packed, dialogue like a screwball, and a brilliant satire and parody. Norm intrigues me, too... How does his character unfold, I wonder? Sarah strikes me as a badass; is she secretly behind Siri? Lol.
Now that's some serious fun for a pilot, lol! But Naomi didn't comment after requesting it?
A film noir spoof set in modern-day America? Yes please! You captured the "noir" aspect so well while also parodying it nicely :)
😂I would watch this show. Good entry, Stephen.