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Telltale crimson trail part 5 ~ republished from 2024

By Raymond G TaylorPublished 3 months ago • Updated 3 months ago • 1 min read
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Trapped by her steely stare, which seemed to last an age, I felt the need to run and hide. Instead, I reached for the soft pack and tapped out an untipped. Pressing the fibrous roll between my lips I realised, too late, how stagey this must have looked.

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“Thought you’d given up,” she said.

“That was yesterday,” I replied, feeling she’d just let me off the hook.

She took a step forward. I thought she was going to kiss me. Horrified, I stepped back, but not before she had plucked the coffin nail from my bottom lip, taking a shred of skin with it. Again, she fixed me with those baby blues.

“What took you so long, John?”

“What?”

“Why did it take you so long to get here… after you drove off?”

I was taken aback at this. Was I a suspect already? Even though I had rehearsed my answer to this question, I was expecting it from the prowl boys, not from Stevie. I hesitated for a moment, transfixed, like a rabbit caught in the headlights.

“I went for a coffee, I blurted out,” without conviction. Then, breathing a sigh of relief, I remembered the paper cup I left on the car seat. Sometimes you can be too clever.

I could see she was trying to work it out. Before she turned away, crumpling the cigarette.

“Some of us have work to do,” she said, dropping the twisted remnants onto the floor as she walked out the door.

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What next? Is John a suspect? What will he do now? Find out in part six:

Long dark night

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Raymond G Taylor

Author based in Margate on the English Kent coast, having moved from London. Known for his short stories and flash fiction, as well as poetry and non-fiction writing on subjects such as art, science, technology and the human condition

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