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The Mother

3rd February, Story #34/366. This is the 4th in a series of super-short stories. You can enjoy it as a stand-alone micro, or if you'd prefer to read them in order (they're all very quick!) then *skip to the end* and I'll link them there.

By L.C. SchäferPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 3 min read
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The Mother
Photo by Maxim Tajer on Unsplash

Why doesn't she flame? Why doesn't she take back her baby and burn me to a crisp, and the whole forest with me?

Her enormous black snout inched through the circle, from her world to ours. Her long neck snaked behind it. The obsidian bulk of her beyond that blocked any view I might have had of the world where dragons live.

It took every bit of strength in my body to hold my injured hands out steady, cradling her dying baby. Her scalding breath blistered the skin anew. It hurt so much I whimpered, scrunching up my face, tears sliding down my cheeks.

"Take him!" I sobbed, almost screaming, near-hysterical with pain and fright. "Please take him, he's dying!"

She blinked her golden eyes. It looked like a shrug.

Other eggs.

"Then why? Why are you here?"

Her lip curled and her eyes narrowed.

For you. Thief.

It wasn't motherly love, then, that had her lash the skies with lightning. It was cold pride, that a puny human pup had taken something of hers. I brought him back to my chest, despairing at how cold he felt, and certain of my own death. Sorry, Mum.

"Please just save him, please!"

But why?

Anger billowed in me. I seized it, and stoked it, because being angry is better than being afraid.

"You're a... a... a shitty mother!"

I thrust him forward again, ready to beg. She opened her jaws, and for a moment I was put in mind of a crocodile mother, tenderly holding her young in her mouth full of knives.

If I wasn't too scared to think straight, I might've thought it was care for her baby that stopped her toasting me alive straight away. Then I might have guessed pride; she wouldn't incinerate her own. Then curiosity for the peculair behaviour of warmblooded creatures.

But I know now: it was revenge. She was considering how best to hurt me, and make it last.

The crunch of her jaws on my wrist, and the searing agony shooting through my body brought me screaming to my knees. Her roar passed over my head, singeing my hair. I passed out with the forest blazing around me.

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Word count (excluding note): 366

Submitted on 3rd February at 11.52AM

Minor edit: correcting some mistakes.

*Quick Author's Note*

Thank you for reading! Please leave a comment so I can reciprocate. Your thoughtful engagement is appreciated. If you enjoyed this, the best compliment you can give is to share it, or read another.

The story behind the story: This is #4 in a series of microfiction stories about this baby dragon. Here they are in order.

1. The Baby

2. The Sickening

3. The Return

My "story every day" project: I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes a 34 day streak. You can find all of them in my Index post. It's also pinned to the top of my profile.

If you're joining me on this "story every day" madne adventure, please leave a link to yours in the comments. Whether you're on a creative bent, like me, and writing mostly microfiction/stories, or whether you have your own, self-imposed criteria, I'd love to see what you come up with for today. I'll try to come back and edit this to link to your piece at the bottom.

If you'd like to buy the cow, (or get more free milk on Kindle Unlimited):

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  • Kenny Penn3 months ago

    Yeah, don’t mess with mama. Our boy is lucky she didn’t take the whole arm!

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Oh. Mama is nasty! I wasn't expecting that.

  • Okay, I did not see that coming, lol! What next? Will the heat from her mouth at least have cauterized the wound so she doesn't bleed to death. (And did she just eat her baby, like a momma guppy does?)

  • Caroline Craven4 months ago

    Gosh. This story made me feel so much. I’m like - save the baby dragon! Your writing is cracking in this. Can’t wait to read the next story.

  • Can't blame her, I don't have a maternal bone either, lol!

  • Shirley Belk4 months ago

    Oh, no...not like the story I had in my mind....glad it's not over yet

  • Woah! That was dark!!! Nice work LC!

  • Heather Hubler4 months ago

    Wonderful descriptive writing :) But damn, mom is cold-hearted (cold-blooded? lol). I'm enjoying this series.

  • John Cox4 months ago

    Another brilliant bit of storytelling, L.C. You brought it to searing life.

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    The agony punishment, very dramatic story 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👌🏽

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    Brutal. Shitty mother indeed. Nice twistiness to this.

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