Laundry Day with Executive Dysfunction
For the Microfiction Challenge. Definitely fiction. Yep.
They collect the clothes, gather the towels, strip the beds, and dump everything in the laundry room.
Totally crushing this!
They see the sauce stain on the shirt and remember they might need to add pizza sauce to the list so they go downstairs to check the pantry. The sauce is expired so they decide to inventory everything else. They notice the dishwasher didn't get started last night so they get a detergent pod.
Detergent reminds them of laundry but now there probably isn't time to do it anyway.
They'll sleep on the couch for three weeks.
Totally crushing this.
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Donna Renee
Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.
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Wonderful story
Donna, I was already laughing by the subtitle.. “Definitely fiction. Yep.” Lol This was such a relatable and humour filled piece, I can relate to this on all the levels! Loved it and you totally crushed it! 😜 Also, congratulations, I saw that this was Top Story the other day and have been meaning to read it!
very good
Simple, Concise, and Creative. Well Done Donna! Please check out my first story on this platform and share your feedback! https://vocal.media/fiction/old-man-s-advice
read my story for kids https://vocal.media/fiction/the-flyaway-hat
So creative! I love your voice and so relatable Donna if you are in the mood for a love story - looking for feedback to maybe turn into a book https://vocal.media/fiction/my-ai-alibi
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So brilliant! ❣️ (and relatable 😅)
Oooh the different angle! I like!!! The title is BOSS and congratulations on the top story validation!
Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!
Interesting
Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!
Congrats on the TS
Its good
Nice wisdom
Loved it. Sounds like me in my late teens and probably my early thirties. Congrats.
Beautiful 😍
Haha!! I need to send this to my mom. She can totally relate!!
nice
This Is Adulting
Haha! Such a fantastic short, Donna! Totally related! It’s like “If You Give a Mouse a Cookie” adulting version. 😂 Congrats on Top Story!!! 💕💫
Excellent dear
Sounds like my children when they were teens!! Brilliant, Loved it!
Yep, definitely fiction 🤣. Well done!
Awesome! Congrats on the top story!