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Laundry Day with Executive Dysfunction

For the Microfiction Challenge. Definitely fiction. Yep.

By Donna ReneePublished 11 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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Laundry Day with Executive Dysfunction
Photo by Randy Tarampi on Unsplash

They collect the clothes, gather the towels, strip the beds, and dump everything in the laundry room.

Totally crushing this!

They see the sauce stain on the shirt and remember they might need to add pizza sauce to the list so they go downstairs to check the pantry. The sauce is expired so they decide to inventory everything else. They notice the dishwasher didn't get started last night so they get a detergent pod.

Detergent reminds them of laundry but now there probably isn't time to do it anyway.

They'll sleep on the couch for three weeks.

Totally crushing this.

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About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.

Work in Progress: WOWH, cozy mystery (paranormal elements)

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock7 months ago

    Totally!

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    lol. I missed this one before. Def relatable.

  • L.C. Schäfer11 months ago

    Ouch. Shots fired. 😳

  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    Donna, I was already laughing by the subtitle.. “Definitely fiction. Yep.” Lol This was such a relatable and humour filled piece, I can relate to this on all the levels! Loved it and you totally crushed it! 😜 Also, congratulations, I saw that this was Top Story the other day and have been meaning to read it!

  • very good

  • K. C. Wexlar11 months ago

    So creative! I love your voice and so relatable Donna if you are in the mood for a love story - looking for feedback to maybe turn into a book https://vocal.media/fiction/my-ai-alibi

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  • Sandra Tena Cole11 months ago

    So brilliant! ❣️ (and relatable 😅)

  • The Dani Writer11 months ago

    Oooh the different angle! I like!!! The title is BOSS and congratulations on the top story validation!

  • Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!

  • Interesting

  • Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Igba alfred11 months ago

    Nice wisdom

  • Gerald Holmes11 months ago

    Loved it. Sounds like me in my late teens and probably my early thirties. Congrats.

  • Beautiful 😍

  • Cezanne Libellen11 months ago

    Haha!! I need to send this to my mom. She can totally relate!!

  • Motivational Bucks11 months ago

    nice

  • Kristen Balyeat11 months ago

    Haha! Such a fantastic short, Donna! Totally related! It’s like “If You Give a Mouse a Cookie” adulting version. 😂 Congrats on Top Story!!! 💕💫

  • Shoaib Jutt11 months ago

    Excellent dear

  • Carol Townend11 months ago

    Sounds like my children when they were teens!! Brilliant, Loved it!

  • Loryne Andawey11 months ago

    Yep, definitely fiction 🤣. Well done!

  • Alyssa Nicole11 months ago

    Awesome! Congrats on the top story!

  • J. R. Lowe11 months ago

    Hahah this is great. I do love a three week couch nap 😂

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