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Laundry Day with Executive Dysfunction

For the Microfiction Challenge. Definitely fiction. Yep.

By Donna ReneePublished 7 days ago 1 min read
Laundry Day with Executive Dysfunction
Photo by Randy Tarampi on Unsplash

They collect the clothes, gather the towels, strip the beds, and dump everything in the laundry room.

Totally crushing this!

They see the sauce stain on the shirt and remember they might need to add pizza sauce to the list so they go downstairs to check the pantry. The sauce is expired so they decide to inventory everything else. They notice the dishwasher didn't get started last night so they get a detergent pod.

Detergent reminds them of laundry but now there probably isn't time to do it anyway.

They'll sleep on the couch for three weeks.

Totally crushing this.


About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.


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  • Tabish Malikabout 11 hours ago

    Wonderful story

  • Donna Foxabout 23 hours ago

    Donna, I was already laughing by the subtitle.. “Definitely fiction. Yep.” Lol This was such a relatable and humour filled piece, I can relate to this on all the levels! Loved it and you totally crushed it! 😜 Also, congratulations, I saw that this was Top Story the other day and have been meaning to read it!

  • very good

  • Adil Chandioa day ago

    Simple, Concise, and Creative. Well Done Donna! Please check out my first story on this platform and share your feedback!

  • K. C. Wexlar3 days ago

    So creative! I love your voice and so relatable Donna if you are in the mood for a love story - looking for feedback to maybe turn into a book

  • So brilliant! ❣️ (and relatable 😅)

  • The Dani Writer4 days ago

    Oooh the different angle! I like!!! The title is BOSS and congratulations on the top story validation!

  • Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!

  • Interesting

  • Great job!!! Congratulations on the Top Story!!!

  • Cathy holmes5 days ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Igba alfred5 days ago

    Its good

  • Igba alfred5 days ago

    Nice wisdom

  • Gerald Holmes5 days ago

    Loved it. Sounds like me in my late teens and probably my early thirties. Congrats.

  • Beautiful 😍

  • Haha!! I need to send this to my mom. She can totally relate!!

  • nice

  • Mehtab Hussain5 days ago

    This Is Adulting

  • Kristen Balyeat5 days ago

    Haha! Such a fantastic short, Donna! Totally related! It’s like “If You Give a Mouse a Cookie” adulting version. 😂 Congrats on Top Story!!! 💕💫

  • Shoaib Jutt5 days ago

    Excellent dear

  • Carol Townend6 days ago

    Sounds like my children when they were teens!! Brilliant, Loved it!

  • Loryne Andawey6 days ago

    Yep, definitely fiction 🤣. Well done!

  • Alyssa Nicole6 days ago

    Awesome! Congrats on the top story!

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