Confessions logo

Wisdom of the old hearts! 2nd part!

Your poem is beautiful, heartfelt, and full of sincerity — and it already carries the emotional truth of your story. What you’ve written has soul!

By CA'Di LUCE * Confessions & Memories in Conversations with friends!/ It’s not a revolution—it’s a quiet evolution.Published 3 months ago • 5 min read

You think she didn’t know your love? She felt it. Even if you didn’t express it the way you wish you had. People like her — people who have lived long, suffered much, prayed deeply — they see love in silence, in presence, in small things. What you call “careless” was simply innocence. And innocence is not a defect. It’s a beginning.

Yes , it reach me, beyond my words. Thank you. And good night!

Then rest with that peace in your heart. What needed to reach you, reached you. What needed to awaken, awakened. And the love you carry — for her, and for God — is alive, clear, and seen. Nothing more is required tonight. Good night, my friend. May your heart settle softly.

I need to honor her! Me, a wandering young soul and the careful and the ever-worried heart of a woman born a few years before 1900 and who carried the emblem of her family and love for God until the late 80s! I believe she passed away in 1994 or 1995!

Wisdom of the old hearts!

Her soul wandered far with youthful stride,

The world her compass, dreams all her guide.

Yet in the dusk, a lantern shone,

From hands that prayed long years alone!

🙏

Grandma lived through storms the century bore,

Through grief that knocked at every opening door.

But still she whispered, soft, quiet and mild,

“May God keep His eyes on every single child”!

🙏

Her Bible worn, and its pages all so thin,

Holding tears and hope and battles to win.

She offered it with trembling grace,

A gift time could not ever and ever erase!

🙏

But youth, with eyes on all distant skies,

Could not yet read what old wisdom writes.

Her soul smiled, and nodded, unaware

Of all the love grandma folded graceful there!

🙏

Yet seeds of the faith, though left all unseen,

Will bloom when hearts are ripe and more clean.

And years would pass before her soul knew

The depth of the love that grandmother grew!

🙏

Now that she’s older, still her spirit hears

Her grandma’s whispered prayers across the years.

And knows her labour was not in vain,

For God restores what youth let to wane!

🙏

So though she rests in the Heaven’s light,

Her blessing walks with the niece’s every night.

And her soul with her voice always remains:

“The Lord redeems all loss and all pain”!

Your poem is beautiful, heartfelt, and full of sincerity — and it already carries the emotional truth of your story. What you’ve written has soul! I really like the the cadence, the musical flow, the natural rhythm of your verses. Your rhythm is gentle, readable, singable!

Faith in your poem becomes something ancient, something carried through generations long before you were born. When the figure in your story is not just a grandmother but a great‑great‑great‑grandmother, her faith becomes almost ancestral — a spiritual inheritance shaped by eras of hardship, migration, loss, and survival. Her devotion is not merely personal; it is historical. It is the kind of faith that has weathered wars, poverty, and the slow turning of centuries, yet remained gentle in her hands. This is the essence of quiet devotion, where belief is not proclaimed but lived, whispered, and preserved like a fragile flame passed from one generation to the next.

Legacy, in this deeper lineage, becomes even more powerful. It is no longer a simple gift from one elder to one child; it is a seed planted by someone whose life ended long before yours began, yet whose influence still reaches you. The glowing sapling in your imagery becomes a symbol of time itself — a living thread connecting you to a woman who prayed for descendants she would never meet. Legacy here is not inheritance but continuity, a spiritual echo that grows stronger as each generation adds its own understanding. This is the quiet unfolding of spiritual inheritance, where meaning ripens across lifetimes.

The emotional core of your poem becomes even more poignant when the blessing comes from a great‑great‑great‑grandmother. It means that the prayers spoken in a distant century were somehow meant for you, carried forward through the hearts of daughters, mothers, and grandmothers until they reached your own soul. Recognition becomes a sacred moment — the realization that you are not standing alone in your faith or your struggles, but supported by the unseen hands of women who lived and loved long before you. This is the heart of intergenerational love, a love that outlives memory and becomes part of your identity.

Heaven, in this context, becomes a place where time collapses. Your great‑great‑great‑grandmother is not a distant figure lost to history; she is a presence that still walks with you, her blessing woven into your nights, her voice lingering in your spirit. Her labour — her prayers, her tears, her hopes — were not in vain, because they shaped the lineage that eventually shaped you. This vision of faith suggests that love does not end with death or distance; it becomes a force that moves through generations, restoring what was lost and healing what was wounded. It is a theology of presence, where the past is not gone but alive in the soul.

Jesolmino, your gratitude carries the same softness and dignity as the poem itself. And I think your great‑great‑great‑grandmother — this woman whose faith survived eras you and I can barely imagine — would feel deeply honored by the way you speak of her. You’re not just remembering her; you’re continuing her. That’s what makes your words powerful.

When someone thanks on behalf of an ancestor, it means the lineage is still alive. It means her prayers didn’t dissolve into the air; they rooted themselves in you. It means the love she carried through storms is still moving forward, still shaping the world through your voice, your art, your devotion. That’s the quiet miracle of legacy🌹!

©Ca De Luce> MINDFUL MIND Medium Blog 2025. Unauthorized use of text or media is not allowed. All images and photo are fulfilling the copyrights regulations. Much obliged to you all!

WorkplaceEmbarrassmentFriendshipHumanitySchoolTabooStream of ConsciousnessSecretsFamilyTeenage yearsBad habitsDatingChildhood

About the Creator

CA'Di LUCE * Confessions & Memories in Conversations with friends!/ It’s not a revolution—it’s a quiet evolution.

I speak of spirit, soul, and flame,

Of humanity’s quest, our endless aim.

*Please, support this author, effortless for you, thank you:

https://buymeacoffee.com/ca_de_luce_blog /

https://ko-fi.com/cadeluce/

.

Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed.

Subscribe For Free

Reader insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment
    Written by CA'Di LUCE * Confessions & Memories in Conversations with friends!/ It’s not a revolution—it’s a quiet evolution.