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I kept jars of air
you breathed, hoping they'd last me
the rest of my life.
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This says so much about love and loss in such a small amount of space.
This is just beautiful. You have packed such a wealth of emotion into just a few wonderfully chosen words. Fantastic job!
As someone who's lost someone along the way- this hit me in the feels. Great job.
Bittersweet and beautiful :)
It's heartwarming to see the lengths we go to preserve cherished memories and the people we hold dear in our hearts.
This is so beautiful.
That was good
Oh my. That's amazing. Congrats on the top story
Beautiful!! Congrats on Top Story!
What an excellent Haiku! It is a short (short) story. I am very impressed with how much you told me with only 17 syllables! Congratulations!
Absolutely stunning !! Congratulations on top story
Congratulations on your Top Story! 😄🤗
So beautiful, delicate and effervescent! Congratulations on Top Story!
Oh wow, so beautiful.
Heartbreakingly beautiful. Loved and subscribed :)
This should be a song.