Your breath
a haiku
I kept jars of air
you breathed, hoping they'd last me
the rest of my life.
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My Name Is Not Cypress
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Beautiful! Deep meaning in a few words.
Nice 🌹
Simply stunning!
Beautiful 😍
Beautiful!
This says so much about love and loss in such a small amount of space.
This is just beautiful. You have packed such a wealth of emotion into just a few wonderfully chosen words. Fantastic job!
As someone who's lost someone along the way- this hit me in the feels. Great job.
Beautiful Congratualions
Bittersweet and beautiful :)
It's heartwarming to see the lengths we go to preserve cherished memories and the people we hold dear in our hearts.
This is so beautiful.
That was good
beautifully
Oh my. That's amazing. Congrats on the top story
Wow! Beautiful!
Beautiful!! Congrats on Top Story!
What an excellent Haiku! It is a short (short) story. I am very impressed with how much you told me with only 17 syllables! Congratulations!
Well done!
Absolutely stunning !! Congratulations on top story
Absolutely beautiful
Congratulations on your Top Story! 😄🤗
So beautiful, delicate and effervescent! Congratulations on Top Story!
Beautiful piece💖
Oh wow, so beautiful.