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Your breath

a haiku

By My Name Is Not CypressPublished 4 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read
Your breath
Photo by Павло Павлюк on Unsplash

I kept jars of air

you breathed, hoping they'd last me

the rest of my life.

love poems

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My Name Is Not Cypress

She might not be as good as she thought.

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  • Norma Jane2 months ago

    Simply stunning!

  • J. S. Wade2 months ago

    Beautiful 😍

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago


  • Molly Miller2 months ago

    This says so much about love and loss in such a small amount of space.

  • This is just beautiful. You have packed such a wealth of emotion into just a few wonderfully chosen words. Fantastic job!

  • Kayla Lindley2 months ago

    As someone who's lost someone along the way- this hit me in the feels. Great job.

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Beautiful Congratualions

  • Samia Afra2 months ago

    Bittersweet and beautiful :)

  • Leeann2 months ago

    It's heartwarming to see the lengths we go to preserve cherished memories and the people we hold dear in our hearts.

  • Em Starr2 months ago

    This is so beautiful.

  • Nobody2 months ago

    That was good

  • Hamza Shafiq2 months ago


  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Oh my. That's amazing. Congrats on the top story

  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    Wow! Beautiful!

  • Ahna Lewis2 months ago

    Beautiful!! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Sandra Matos2 months ago

    What an excellent Haiku! It is a short (short) story. I am very impressed with how much you told me with only 17 syllables! Congratulations!

  • Brenton F2 months ago

    Well done!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Absolutely stunning !! Congratulations on top story

  • Oneg In The Arctic2 months ago

    Absolutely beautiful

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story! 😄🤗

  • So beautiful, delicate and effervescent! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Beautiful piece💖

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    Oh wow, so beautiful.

  • Loryne Andawey2 months ago

    Heartbreakingly beautiful. Loved and subscribed :)

  • Joe Patterson4 months ago

    This should be a song.

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