Seeping into my pores
The smell of your sweat
Soaking into me
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I have witnessed a death that I relive every time I step into an elevator. Although it no longer affects me as deeply—given that it's been 11 years since the incident—it remains a heart- rending memory from my first and last day as a paramedic. My initial call to the scene involved a man who seemed to have fallen down the elevator shaft of a high-rise building. Alternatively, it might have been that the elevator moved upwards while he was working on it. Different scenarios were being considered when I arrived.
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Fine image , Congratulations on top story. I am happy.
Nice image , Congratulations on top story
Very beautiful and poignant! Congratulations on Top Story.
Nice work Atomic!! Congrats.😁
Oh, this is so good, so pleased to see this on the main page, congrats on a deserved Top Story!
short and sweet
Lovely! Congratulations on 🔝 story 💐
I love all of your love poems and this one is no exception 🫶
Brilliantly written!!! Love it!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️
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congratulations on TS. GREAT poem about a heartfelt love.
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The photo you used let me know ‘love poem’ A malevolent photo with the same words would have changed the meaning and still worked. Love.
Sensually heady.