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By Kristen BalyeatPublished 10 months ago 3 min read
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y o u
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e x p r e s s i o n

of

t r a n s c e n d e n t

beauty

c o s m i c

animation

w a l k i n g

the

e a r t h

i l l u m i n a t e

being

p o w e r e d

by

our

b r i g h t e s t

star

a s t r o n o m i c

powers

a l i g n e d

for

y o u r

birth

y o u r

e x i s t e n c e

is

n o t

a

m i s t a k e

it’s

a

m a c r o c o s m i c

m i r a c l e

y o u

were

b o r n

y o u ' r e

the

m o s t

m a g n i f i c e n t

pieces

of

s t a r d u s t

and

l i g h t

c o a l e s c e d

in

h u m a n

form

a

v i t a l

s t i t c h

of

the

m i c r o c o s m i c

w e a v e

perfect

h e a v e n l y

m a n i f e s t a t i o n

of

r a d i a n t

e n e r g y

k n i t

in

a

c e l l u l a r

b o d y

v i b r a n t

e s s e n c e

of

d i v i n e

c r e a t i o n

y o u ' r e

an

e l e g a n t

d a n c e

of

m i c r o s c o p i c

c o n n e c t i o n s

a

w a l t z

of

m a j e s t i c

e l e m e n t s

shaped

into

f l e s h

and

b o n e

r i c h l y

e x p r e s s e d

by

the

s o n g

of

e x i s t e n c e

as

a

u n i q u e

and

e x t r a o r d i n a r y

t o n e

y o u r

h e a r t

is

p u l s i n g

here

on

p u r p o s e

y o u r

b r e a t h

is

the

perfect

r h y t h m i c

r e s o n a n c e

y o u r

v i b r a t i o n

a

v i t a l

n o t e

that

m u s t

be

p l a y e d

l i f e ’ s

symphony

is

c o m p o s e d

of

your

p r e s e n c e

the

s p a r k

that

is

y o u

is

s a c r e d

v a s t n e s s

merged

for

y o u r

e s s e n c e

to

a l i g h t

y o u ’ r e

a

w o n d e r

of

the

i n f i n i t e

g a l a x i e s

a

u n i q u e

i l l u m i n a t i o n

of

r a d i a n t

l i g h t

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About the Creator

Kristen Balyeat

Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night– I’m humbly one of the many vessels they use to come to life.

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  • Mason Darnielle4 months ago

    Very insightful and uplifting ✨🙏

  • Rachel Deeming6 months ago

    Thank you, Kristen. You are this too. I needed these words today. Thanks Grz for pointing me in this direction. I feel like the universe is speaking to me today with the positive poems I am reading. Have a great day!

  • Amjad Ateih Dib9 months ago

    what a strange lovely story sister , you have a great work

  • Darla M Seely10 months ago

    Kristin, so beautiful! Will you please read the three poems I posted in the current love poem contest?

  • Adenubi John10 months ago

    Wonderful

  • Wow I needed this! Very good 😊

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    I read this again and am so very impressed again. thank you!

  • Whoaaaa! Your poems are always brimming with positivity and are so uplifting! Not to mention mesmerising and so magical!

  • Great job on This Inspirational piece✨💖😉📝

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    I'm happy to say, "I told you so." 😉 Congratulations, Kristen!

  • Gina C.10 months ago

    Sooo gorgeous and inspirational! 🥹❤️ A truly divine and uplifting message 🙌🏼 You’ve excelled at creating a motivating light in all who read this 🤗

  • Cendrine Marrouat10 months ago

    Superb!!!! I haven't read such creative poetry in a long time! Your work would fit our magazine and/or new anthology. You should send us something! If interested, here is more information: https://vocal.media/01/current-opportunities-for-writers-authors-and-artists.

  • Rob Angeli10 months ago

    Yes, nothing could make this poem better. You provide a mystical release in the light of scientific experience, bringing the commonalities between human earth and cosmos into a whirl. A true supernova!

  • Naomi Gold10 months ago

    I share these sentiments as an astrologer, but I could never write about them in this way. What a gift!

  • Jordan Sky Daniels10 months ago

    Whoa that's deep

  • C. H. Richard10 months ago

    Wow surreal experience reading this poem! ♥️♥️♥️❤️Absolutely love. Needs to read by all who are struggling ♥️

  • "I sing of the body electric." The Optimist's View: Before we were made the odds of any single one of us ever coming into being were astronomically high against. Every single last one of us is an absolute miracle of creation. The Pessimist's View: Once we're here, the odds of us being here are 1:1. Eh.

  • Whoaaaa, this was so powerful! Your words were magical and so uplifting! You always write such beautifully breathtaking poem!

  • Grz Colm10 months ago

    🙌🌙✨ Kristen, the structure of this style of yours seems to always unexpectedly sneak up on me and be tremendously powerful! What a way of looking at things and if we could understand this and really affirm it! Wow. I really think this was the “sequel” haha I was asking for in my last msg. So thank you! ☺️

  • Naveedkk 10 months ago

    The imagery in this poem is so vivid and powerful.

  • So uplifting I could read this everyday as an amazing affirmation

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    I loved the line “cosmic animation walking the earth” this poem is of high quality and contains mysterious messages about our uniques individual purpose in the cosmos. I love everything about space so of course this was right up my alley and the photo is amazing. Thank you.

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Wow! This is ethereal and uplifting and powerful and - wow! I'll look for it in the Top Stories!

  • Paul Stewart10 months ago

    You are a superstar at these kinds of pieces! This is beautiful, Kristen! So inspirational, a beautiful reminder to everyone and just oozing your individual voice. I will read this again...and maybe even again! I am sure I will return to say Congrats when it's made Top Story!

  • Dana Stewart10 months ago

    Love, love, love this. To think poets are just walking around out there in the wild, with these lovely, soul touching words in their brains. Excellent work!

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