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Who By Fire?

My forty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena and my final entry for the Vocal Quadru-Haiku Challenge

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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This is my forty-first dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.

This is my final entry for the Vocal Quadru-Haiku Challenge which you can read about below.

The main criteria are here

Write haiku inspired by any or all of the four elements: earth, water, air, fire.

My friend Lee also told me that the seasons should be implied rather than named, so I will try and apply that concept in these four haiku.

You can read my first entry by following the link at the end of this which also provides a fuller definition of the requirements for haiku.

The music I have chosen is "Who By Fire?" by Leonard Cohen which also provided inspiration for this piece from the sadly missed poet and performer.

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Bright Flowers Blooming

To Mark Your Vicious Drowning

In A Water Butt

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Then Burned By Hot Fire

Heat Of The Sun Charred Your Skin

A Blackened Carcass

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Brown Leaves Are Falling

Covering Your Grave Interred

Under The Dug Earth

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Suffocated By

Lack Of Air In Your Freezing

Final Place Of Rest

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was brilliance at its finest!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Good one.

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