Can you see me here?
What do you see?
Do my eyes still smile?
Does my hair appear on fire, up in grey flames?
Can you see me here?
I have to ask because at times I feel pretty
invisible.
Do I wear my heart on my sleeve?
Do I wear it well?
What should I see when I look at my self?
What do you see?
About the Creator
Jay
I’ve been writing since middle school! I found it is a great way to express self‘s darker or exaggerated sides and to distill a thought or concept. Also see: https://instagram.com/metaphor_poetry https://www.clickasnap.com/Jamesjcm1969
In Eclipse Challenge Winners
Creator Dane BH is one of our Vocal stalwarts. We’re so grateful to all of your in our Vocal community, and so thrilled by your achievements. This is the third time Dane has won one of our challenges, and she appears too on our Vocal podcast, Write Here, Write Now — take a listen if you haven’t already. But she’s not our winner because we know her: the subtlety and simplicity of we watched the world go dark. together. is what made it our winner of the In Eclipse challenge, with the grace and ease of its lines and observation. As it happens it also expresses the community spirit that means so much to us.
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