We Understand loss only after we loss someone
All about love
A poem about love
WE understand loss, only after we loss someone we love
And we want them back in our life
Even as a shadow to feel whole
Even as a dream to feel they are with us
Even as a sensation to feel the comfort
We take a millions of moments for granted
Because we believe There would be million more
Yet they go far away- into the land of silence
but they never know we still carry them with us always
The deep in our heart, love that reside
No matter where we are no matter where we go
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Hamza Shafiq
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Since the only thing that might pull us back up is caring, it only makes sense that here, long after I’ve let my anger born of heartbreak and grief misplace, multiply, misdirect itself, let the enormity of my solitude turn into something I don’t know how to dispute with, something thick and heavy and suffocating, let the coldness thrash and fight under my skin, deeper still, in between the arches of my organs; here where the ground is always close and the fall is easy and I surrender to it often, lie without purpose for hours, it only makes sense that it is here, I decide to show up and surrender to the possibilities of the night. Show up to those who I deserted. Drawn to the sense of accomplishment, something I haven’t felt in a while, to memory of finished dish sending its aroma into the world and with it, wrapping the room with a strong sense of sweet nostalgia, I get up and decide to cook. I pick up my phone, type a message that reads “Dinner at mine @ 8PM, don’t bring anything” and before my courage deserts me again, drop it in our friends’ group chat, the way one would do when diffusing a bomb in the movies: one eye closed, snip at the wire, hoping for the best.
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Yes we would always carry them deep in our heart, through all the grief we fell. Beautifully written poem!
this is so very true, nice portrait of grief 😀