Oh my word, why are you so loud?
I can hear you over a screaming crowd.
My ears are bleeding, my nerves are shot,
Subtle you are really NOT!
The evening was peaceful, the mood was chill,
Until your obnoxious volume screeched like a drill.
Now adrenaline is pumping, I feel a bit strung out,
All for something I don't even care about.
This is on discount, buy that today,
Hurry, hurry before the deals go away!
The more you profess to tell me the things that I need,
The more I will never buy them–I would rather bleed.
And don't get me started on medicinal ads,
If doctors prescribe it, why list all the bad?
I don't need to know it can give constipation,
Your long list of side effects only makes me change the station.
Your sale is extended, buy-one-get-one new suits?
I'm grabbing the remote and hitting the mute.
So maybe change your flawed method and try to be calm,
Or the only thing you'll get from me is the freaking f-bomb.
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Written in response to constantly being bombarded by commercials that are noticeably much louder than the program I'm watching. I understand they are trying to get people's attention but all they do is get on my nerves. The jarring volume change is not necessary. Rant over, lol.
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Comments (7)
This is perfectly expressed and very relatable. This is why I only watch streaming stuff. So then I can dodge a lot of the crappy commercials! Awesome work!
Omgggg, tell me about it! I'm the same! The more it tells me to get something, the more determined I becomes not to get it. Lol!
I've noticed that too, the advert always seems to be that little bit louder than program you're actually interested in watching. Annoyingly clever...
I am there with you on this
So relatable! Those darn commercials really are so loud; felt this! Great work!
Loving your slam poem!!!
Omg, yes!! That drives me nuts. I end up muting most times as well.