Watermelon Summer
Dancing Watermelon
Watermelon Summer
Walt to it
Now Wiggle Wiggle Wiggle
And lean cut it
And bite to it
Take another bite
Take another sweet bite
Eat it all up
Eat it all up till you can’t stop no more
Run home for some more
Me and my watermelon summer
Eat eat that watermelon like you slapping a butt
Long live my watermelon summer
Ohh so good eat that watermelon 🍉
No no give it back
Sun kisses
U got me by the seed
Mmmmm, yummy
Mmmmm, yummy
Met me at the fridge till we can’t eat the watermelon no more
Met me at the fridge till we can’t eat the watermelon no more
Eak where did my watermelon summer go?
I am a watermelon Summer Raider
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Congrats 🎉🎉🎉
There was a point of time when I was addicted to watermelon, lol. I loved your poem!
This and your last story are so connected. It makes me think of the Harry Styles song.
It is a great story! Keep it up!
Well done. Congrats on Top Story.
I am a huge fan of watermelon and this quirky little piece! So much fun and joy! Congrats on Top Story!
I love watermelon!!
Great thank u for give me wonderful reading experience keep it up give suggestions my posts and subscribe me !! HAVE A WONDER FUL DAY
I love water melon so much, and this poem was just delightful 🤗 Congrats on Top Story!
Watermelon, how iconic of summer. Congratulations on Top Story!
Congrats on your Top Story!🎉💃🏽🍉
I hate watermelon...but I like this. Top Story indeed...
Pure fun! I loved this one, Mariann! Congratulations on the well-deserved Top Story!
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Full to bursting with the joy of living!
Awesome ✨ Congratulations 🎉 😉💯👍✨🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉Top Story, Very Well Deserved💯❗❗❗
Oh man, I don’t even know how to articulate how much and why I liked that so much but I did… love that! That made me want endless summer and endless watermelon and just endless… all of that. Congrats on the top story this one had a unique and special feel! Definitely deserving.
Seriously I now want some watermelon 🍉 ❤️🍉❤️🍉❤️🍉❤️ Well done and congratulations on Top story 👏
Congrats on TS! This was a great poem!
Congratulations on your top story 🌈
Congrats on the TS
Congrats on Top Story, Mariann! 🥂💃🏻
What a fun read, Mariann. Makes me want to go out and by some before the summer is over. Congrats on your top story!
Nice one
Very good vibes here I love your style 💥👋👋👋☺️💓