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was walking

we spoke color

By TestPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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i went walking with you

when my world was just black and white

we whispered under the willow

by the big pond

you know

the one with the snapping turtle

and the secret cove

we talked color into our world that day

with each word between us

painting the springtime

even the sky was so blue

by the time you finished your tale

we brought color into the world

you and i

each new hue

connecting us

to the breath, of the earth

our conversation magic

healing wounds

connecting with our new world

the one we spoke into place

you know

on the day we parted ways

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