Wake Up
For The Vocal "Inverse" Challenge
By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 4 months ago β’ 1 min read
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Image by Mike Singleton from Pixabay
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You Are Asleep
In The Realm Of Morpheus
Nightmares
Dreams You Remember
Dreams You Forget
Dreams You Love
Drifting
You Feel For The Button
The Alarm Is Sounding
In The Comfort Of Your Bed
You Are Awake
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The music is "Wake Up" by XTC
Comments (8)
The clocks remind me of the Dali painting where they are melting. I like how the alarm sounding in the morning comes as a quick contrast to the dreaming lines, just like how we get woken upπ
I snooze for 50 minutes before I actually get out of bed, lol. Loved your poem!
Hahah this is great! Iβd often fall asleep in the past after the alarm, Mike. Oops. I loved the talk of dreams too. One of my obsessions. Well done! π
Not if the button I found was good for another 10 minute snooze, lol.
I love how this poem engages in the dual ideas of waking and thinking your awake while still asleep. Great read!
Nicely done!
Lovely!
Nice short night of dreams poem π