Vibrant Love
Young and new but just as powerful
Originally written on August 5th, 2016, revised March 2nd, 2022.
This feeling makes all colors appear vibrant and vivid,
It is like a beautiful dream becoming true.
Things I feel for you is the night sky without limit
And billions of stars that unfold in front of me and you.
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Songs of love that I play and listen
Evoke emotions so passionate and new,
And while my mind gets lost in a haze while we are kissing
Our hearts whispered words that no one else knew.
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They say this kind of love can be addicting -
Makes us ignore our surroundings, overlook each other's flaws,
Though love is exactly that - true and unconditional,
Hold my hand and let's tear down these walls.
I wrote this poem about 2 months into dating my partner in crime, it was the first time I wrote a poem after feeling nothing but happiness. Before I met him, I only wrote poems when I experienced pain - it was a huge change in my style and creative force.
If you enjoyed reading the "Vibrant Love" poem, check out my other love poem: https://vocal.media/poets/love-waited-for-us
You will notice key differences in how I perceived love in 2016 and in 2022, as I matured emotionally, I realized that love becomes more powerful as it ages.
Thank you for reading my work and see you in the next story! :)
About the Creator
Dovile Miliauskaite
I have found writing extremely therapeutic & when I write, it sometimes comes out in rhyme.
My goal is to explore my creative side; once ideas flush my mind, I pledge to write and share them with the world. :)
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