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A Mountain Haiku

By Harmony KentPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Caspar Camille Rubin on Unsplash

The snow-clad mountain

Solid, softens the edges

Of the gathered clouds

[Author’s Note: Unsui is the Japanese word for novice monks, and means to be free and unhindered as clouds and water. The mountain can be a reference to a Zen master.]

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Harmony Kent

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I began writing at 40 after a life-changing injury. An avid reader & writer, I love to review & support my fellow authors.

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  • Robbie Cheadleabout a year ago

    Very nice, Harmony. Mountains have always fascinated humans.

  • D.L. Finnabout a year ago

    So beautiful, Harmony :)

  • Gwen Planoabout a year ago

    Beautiful. ❤️

  • Mark Crouchabout a year ago

    Loved it

  • Michele Jonesabout a year ago

    Very beautiful, Harmony.

  • Kymber Hawkeabout a year ago

    This is a beautiful Haiku, Harmony!

  • Cheryl Oregliaabout a year ago

    I love how the clouds hug the mountain as if to keep her warm! C

  • Kaliyah Myersabout a year ago

    I didn't think twice about the title, Unsui, until I read your Authors note. Now it feels so much more. Like it was wonderful to begin with but that title, I think, is perfect for a mountain. That was brilliant! :)

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