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ɘꙅibɒɿɒφ ~ ᴎoiƚɒᴎmɒᗡ |ɒᴎɿɘƚƎ
~ Eternal Damnation
has been vanquished in a fiery grave
your life
is everlasting, beyond the end days
suffering
is dead and has surrendered control
God
will collect your immortal soul
Satan
has been conquered: it is written in the scrolls
~ Paradise
~~~
This is an entry in the Inverse Challenge (a poem that takes on a different meaning when you read the lines from bottom to top). You can check it out here:
About the Creator
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˜”*°•.˜”*°• Time is our most valuable asset. Thank you for spending some of your time with me! •°*”˜.•°*”˜
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Comments (11)
Excellent inverse!
Brillant work! So very well conceived and well executed!
I like the contrast between the longer sentences and the single word-lines, and this works well both ways. A thought-provoking poem, especially for today’s world.
The age old battle between God and the devil. I think the are both tied right about now. Half of us with one and half the other. Who will be winning. Great poem.
This is one of the best ones, imo!
Oh. This is really well done.
That's very creative! I love it!🥰
Omgggg, I cannotttttt find the correct words to expresss how much I loveeeeee the bottom to top! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
tough subject. definitely makes for challenging thoughts which makes for the best writing :)
First off, great choice for picture it really goes with this. Secondly, i really enjoyed the way you combined both thoughts
Whoa! That's a strong one. Crazy good Rob!