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To my dear

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By Esala GunathilakePublished about a month ago 1 min read

I like the drizzle,

Because I can sacrifice you my chest-umbrella,

I bloom by thundering,

Because you hide in my arms,

I love when flowers bloom,

Because they make you a princess by having them on your head,

I am pleased if your footwear is lost,

Because then I can carry you,

I like your hands to comb my thick peach fuzz,

Because then I can't think of anything,

Dear, it is just you, own the exquisite smile,

That made me a poet,

These eyes blink like never ever before,

Only because your sight mixed with much innocence,

It is just like bearing one flower in the whole life,

By a sunflower stalk,

I can immerse myself in an ocean of thoughts for you,

I know, water in that ocean is never salty,

You are not an anatomy to me,

But a mesmerizing feeling,

Yes my intimate, it is!

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Esala Gunathilake

I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.

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Comments (33)

  • Canuck Scriber L.Lachapelle Author2 days ago

    Beautiful!

  • Alexandra Ntui7 days ago

    This is so beautiful

  • Denelsia Walker8 days ago

    💕💕💕

  • Cool 😎

  • Dawnxisoul393art19 days ago

    Great, your words convey a sense of awe and appreciation for this special connection, thank you for sharing this heartfelt and captivating poem.

  • Dylan 20 days ago

    Very nice.

  • Very nice poem.

  • ema23 days ago

    This is lovely, very romantic ❤

  • Staringale24 days ago

    I pretty sure your girlfriend would love this. It's beautiful especially the line 'You are not an anatomy to me, But a mesmerizing feeling'. Another masterpiece.

  • Very creative, walks us all the way through to your point, you are not anatomy but a mesmerizing feeling. Can I use that line on my wife, but sorry I won't be able to tell you where it leads, I'm too shy.

  • Ali Demir25 days ago

    I was enchanted when I read your content, thank you Esala, for all your efforts, time and good feelings

  • So beautifully mesmerizing! I especially liked these two lines "You are not an anatomy to me,/But a mesmerizing feeling,"

  • ED CLEFF 27 days ago

    Magnificent): Keep up the good work!

  • Hannah Moore29 days ago

    Very romantic.

  • P.A.Vinura Jayasankaabout a month ago

    Woah!!!!This is next level and your imagination is so soothing and gives me an inviting feeling....You nicely spreads the love through these lines...Well done bro!!

  • Ali SPabout a month ago

    I like the line “ I bloom by thundering” because it gives this explosive coming to life. Nicely done!

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a month ago

    Beautiful!❤️

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    I love "chest-umbrella"

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, this was so wonderful! Loved your poem!

  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)about a month ago

    Wow! I love it! Best!

  • Byron Loderickabout a month ago

    Bravo young fellow. Outstanding.

  • shanmuga priyaabout a month ago

    Welcome Esala ....with your beautiful poem....I liked your poem 😍🤩😻

  • Ainy Abrahamabout a month ago

    Deep emotions. Nice

  • Rony Sutradarabout a month ago

    Nice poetry,😘

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