I like the drizzle,
Because I can sacrifice you my chest-umbrella,
I bloom by thundering,
Because you hide in my arms,
I love when flowers bloom,
Because they make you a princess by having them on your head,
I am pleased if your footwear is lost,
Because then I can carry you,
I like your hands to comb my thick peach fuzz,
Because then I can't think of anything,
Dear, it is just you, own the exquisite smile,
That made me a poet,
These eyes blink like never ever before,
Only because your sight mixed with much innocence,
It is just like bearing one flower in the whole life,
By a sunflower stalk,
I can immerse myself in an ocean of thoughts for you,
I know, water in that ocean is never salty,
You are not an anatomy to me,
But a mesmerizing feeling,
Yes my intimate, it is!
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Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Very creative, walks us all the way through to your point, you are not anatomy but a mesmerizing feeling. Can I use that line on my wife, but sorry I won't be able to tell you where it leads, I'm too shy.
I was enchanted when I read your content, thank you Esala, for all your efforts, time and good feelings
So beautifully mesmerizing! I especially liked these two lines "You are not an anatomy to me,/But a mesmerizing feeling,"
Magnificent): Keep up the good work!
Very romantic.
Woah!!!!This is next level and your imagination is so soothing and gives me an inviting feeling....You nicely spreads the love through these lines...Well done bro!!
I like the line “ I bloom by thundering” because it gives this explosive coming to life. Nicely done!
Beautiful!❤️
I love "chest-umbrella"
Oooo, this was so wonderful! Loved your poem!
Wow! I love it! Best!
Bravo young fellow. Outstanding.
Welcome Esala ....with your beautiful poem....I liked your poem 😍🤩😻
Deep emotions. Nice
Nice poetry,😘
“Own the exquisite smile, that made me a poet” lovveeee that line!! Keep it up, great poem
Lovely poetry, Esala!
beautifully conveys a deep sense of affection. very nice Esala!
Nice poem.
Very good
nice
Nicely done ✅
very good