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Through the Fog

A Haiku

By Lindsay SfaraPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Through the Fog
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Wait. We are the same.

We live, we love, and we dream.

Why do I hate you?

heartbreakStream of Consciousnesssocial commentaryHaiku

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Lindsay Sfara

I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.

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"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien

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Comments (7)

  • The Invisible Writer5 months ago

    Oh I did not see that ending coming🫢 well done and great question

  • Rowan Finley 5 months ago

    Of course I love this so much!!!!

  • John Cox5 months ago

    This is a powerful Haiku! I love how you mine the incongruent hate of the other for such an elevating poem. Great writing!

  • Randy Baker5 months ago

    Great job! That last line was the make-it-or-break-it moment and you nailed it. Had you said, "why do you hate me?", it would have been a different, lesser, poem.

  • Sometimes we just don't know the answer to that, do we? Loved your Haiku!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    That last line is a gut punch. Really, really well done.

  • Toby Heward5 months ago

    Great question

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