There's Magic Tonight
A Romantic/Scientific Sensational Challenge Entry
There's magic tonight
as the light shines through your stunning blonde hair dancing for my optic nerve
There's magic tonight
as your voice carries your loving words and pretty tones, awakening my auditory nerve
There's magic tonight
as that familiar scent flows with the breeze and triggers my olfactory nerve
There's magic tonight
as the touch of your soft and delicate skin calms and excites my trigeminal nerve
There's magic tonight
as that sweet taste of your kiss decadently engages my glossopharyngeal nerve
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My latest entry into the Sensational Challenege on Vocal. You can find out more about it here -
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About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (6)
I'm re-titling this "You're on my nerves". Of course you had me at geeky, medical terms. I loved how they didn't interrupt the romantic side of this though. Of course, that could just be me, lol. Loved it!
Simply magical.
This was great Paul, I loved the repetitive line through out! You definitely played on the senses of the reader and created a beautiful story in this poem!
WOW that is awesome. But I have to say, because I am a bit of a smart ass....you are getting on my nerves, LOL
This is some good shit 😁
Look at you getting all romantical and stuff! 🤣 Seriously, this is awesome. Well done, Paul!