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The Silent Hours

When the mind does race

By Colleen Millsteed Published 10 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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The silence of the cold dark night,

The hours rushing towards the midnight strike,

The chill burns upon oneโ€™s face,

The world questioned as itโ€™s seems dreamlike.

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Eerie calm outside the windows glow,

A call of a curlew as it defends its nest,

Then the silence screams incredibly loud,

The twilight hours some love the best.

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A train horn sounds off in the distance,

The clackety clack of its travels abound,

The loudest call is the ringing in the ears,

While the world slumbers without a sound.

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The weary eyes begin to droop in protest,

But the brain races with the weight of suffering,

Round and round the thoughts jumble,

No control and certainly no buffering.

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The impossible to-do list rolls on and on,

The heartbreak of rejection felt over and over,

The worry of the future thrown into the mix,

Knowing the morningโ€™s going to feel like the worst hangover.

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Body weary of the tossing and turning,

Begging for a break in peaceful slumber,

The mind has been hijacked against better wishes,

As anxiety and worry mount in number.

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Dreams patiently await their turn,

Ready for when the subconscious takes control,

For sleep must eventually win its battle,

Allowing the peace to heal and console.

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The silent hours can be friend or nemesis,

The golden hours or the loneliest nights,

Some good, some bad, some mediocre,

Itโ€™s up to our mind when we turn out the lights.

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Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry โ€” itโ€™s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves โ€” Iโ€™m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock10 months ago

    And there are times when our minds have minds of their own.

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Beautiful and amazing!!!! Loving it!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

  • So true my friend. The silence that's sometimes our friend would so easily turn into our enemy. Fantastic poem!

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I love poems written about the night l! Great work!

  • Jay Kantor10 months ago

    Dear Colleen - Ever try to 'control' your dreams by 'Tossing and Turning' yet we still dream-on - - Lovely - Jay

  • Denise E Lindquist10 months ago

    โค๏ธ

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