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The Man Born Blind

Inverse Poem

By Gabriel HuizengaPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Second Place in Inverse Challenge

Do

I

Yet

Exist in this story

That I might presume to

Walk on by, unconcerned

Even as I hear a fellow soul choosing to

Cry aloud, asking only for acknowledgement -

I simply

Look on with pity, and inaction -

Will he look to me with sightless eyes

to ease this burden (?)

I ask my God

If perhaps

I am the man born blind.

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*Author's Note: Read normally, this poem reflects some of my thoughts after walking by a blind, homeless man on a London street, who was literally calling out, "will someone please acknowledge me?" My choice to just keep walking haunts me to this day. The inverse reading of the poem is my creative reflection on what the internal world of this blind man might have been. Thank you for your read- may we learn to be less blind together <3

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Gabriel Huizenga

Twas for love of words that I first joined this site:

Poetry, especially, and dear short stories too;

For to live one's best is to read, and to write!

So find me in words here, and I'll find you 💙

Thanks for stopping by! :)

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    Written by Gabriel Huizenga