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The Golden Circle

A Snafu Senryu Trilogy

By J. S. WadePublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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The Golden Circle
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Eighteen

He yelled, and she cried,

Who cares the color of walls?

Unwitting, love died.

Twenty-One

Red Roses enhance

belated apologies.

“I’m married,” burns deep.

Sixty-Eight

Golden reunion,

Old lovers dance, rekindled.

Who cares about walls?

••• ••• •••

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About the Creator

J. S. Wade

Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.

J. S. Wade owns all work contained here.

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    These are such great entries!! Twenty-One gave me that vibe of forbidden love and regret for past choices. Nicely done Scott!

  • Twenty-one was my favorite all really good

  • So glad there's no bad blood between them. Loved your Senryu trilogy!

  • Poppy 7 months ago

    I love this! So wholesome

  • JBaz7 months ago

    What a great way of writing this way. A real eye opening truth.

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    Wow. Hard-hitting, with a nice finish!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Sounds like a lovely reunion.

  • Poignantly lovely.

  • Jay Kantor7 months ago

    Hi 'j' ~ Fun how we seem to topic the same/with our own slants; but you with much less words: See my - 'Love~Hate' - Circles of Life - you may relate? 'j'

  • Lilly Cooper7 months ago

    I really enjoyed your take on the challenge :) the journey of two people through their lives is bitter sweet ❤️

  • Hannah Moore7 months ago

    This is lovely, so much so artfully unsaid. But such a long gap, I wanted one more pin in the map!

  • Babs Iverson7 months ago

    Fantastic golden circle!!! Loving it!!!

  • Dana Stewart7 months ago

    Insightful - as we get older we prioritize the right things. Nice one, J.S. :)

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