
We met in a glade you and I
As the moon stood high in the sky
Woods eclipsing us in every way
And nothing left but darkness surrounds
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And in that dark and windy glade
A brand new pact was thusly made
With the exchanges that we bade
To draw me closer you did dade
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Stepped into moonlight pure apparition
Slowly form changed to solid condition
No longer a clear ghostly rendition
You take a companion-like edition
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You did not have to at all try seduce
For you were my lover I did deduce
To then kiss you I did not need excuse
To this end I did try to so conduce
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With lingered steps I take into the glade
As all my harried vision seems to fade
With all my alarm ceasing to evade
Drawing close towards my nubile maid
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Coming into middle moonlight's cascade
I can feel your face caught in heavy staid
For this moment there is nothing I trade
As our faces begin to closely wade
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Our bodies and hands are so gently laid
As our fingers caressed and slowly played
You around my neck and I through your braid
Eyes locked with no chance that they ever strayed
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I'm in my jacket, you in your brocade
Neither of us carry hint of afraid
This is the best moment for which we've prayed
Then our mouths begin a kissing crusade
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Love for you eternally my dear maid
As affection is no longer delayed
Every touch exuberantly conveyed
Our tongues a never-ending serenade
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The moment cut short and quickly unmade
As I feel the blood from that unknown blade
On my hands and across your waist arrayed
Your life fleeting fast with love's fate betrayed
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I cry out in anguish at what's unmade
What magic caused this terrible invade
Of death into this amazing parade
In love carried into the dreamy glade
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Gone forever is my dearest love,
About the Creator
Caeizar
Take a drink from my words and see. See the words that make truly me. Let me be your mysterious guide, to unveil the visage I try to hide.
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Beautiful
You left your last line open after that comma... A nice touch. And 'dade'?
beautiful!
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