Hello my Aphrodite
Beloved Queen of my heart
Tonight would you stay with me
And make passions of our art
In carnal actions nigh
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Hello my Aphrodite
Of what cause is your sorrow
For I shall return in the morrow
To make my promises not hollow
Hold thine heart within my sleeves
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Feel your hair within the breeze
As I embrace in your bosom
Caressed in thine vellum
Of arms wrapped in true ease
To protect our love
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First gentle caressing turns to clasping
Of hands then bodies taken to grasping
We don't even think of even asking
Whether we should explore our shapes further
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Your neck drives me to wanton devour
Get lost in the ardorous machinations of the hour
See fit to forget all ordered notions
As our bodies move to rhythmic motions
Of a consistent sea
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Our love enough to drown an ocean
There is no question in our devotion
The only person I want to drown with is thee
Drown with me my Aphrodite
About the Creator
Caeizar
Take a drink from my words and see. See the words that make truly me. Let me be your mysterious guide, to unveil the visage I try to hide.
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Snacktime Sonata Challenge Winners
Well, your Snacktime Sonatas made us hungry, and that’s about the highest compliment we have. Food — taste, smell, sensation — is a powerful conduit to the past, to memories pleasurable and painful and sometimes bittersweet, a mixture of comfort and challenge. Congratulations to Penny Fuller for Sativa — it’s a first win for Penny — a hymn to the “secret, unbounded/freedoms” of fresh peas in the pod. The narrative voice of the poem doesn’t really want to be outside, but finds joy in the green things of the earth; this is a lovely work of resilience.
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