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Hello My Aphrodite

by Caeizar 22 days ago in surreal poetry / love poems / inspirational / art
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... beloved Queen of my heart ...

Artwork by Alex Cipriano @alexciprianoart

Hello my Aphrodite

Beloved Queen of my heart

Tonight would you stay with me

And make passions of our art

In carnal actions nigh


Hello my Aphrodite

Of what cause is your sorrow

For I shall return in the morrow

To make my promises not hollow

Hold thine heart within my sleeves


Feel your hair within the breeze

As I embrace in your bosom

Caressed in thine vellum

Of arms wrapped in true ease

To protect our love


First gentle caressing turns to clasping

Of hands then bodies taken to grasping

We don't even think of even asking

Whether we should explore our shapes further


Your neck drives me to wanton devour

Get lost in the ardorous machinations of the hour

See fit to forget all ordered notions

As our bodies move to rhythmic motions

Of a consistent sea


Our love enough to drown an ocean

There is no question in our devotion

The only person I want to drown with is thee

Drown with me my Aphrodite

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Take a drink from my words and see. See the words that make truly me. Let me be your mysterious guide, to unveil the visage I try to hide.

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  • Angelina F. Thomas6 days ago

    Excellence is this work you have created! Keep up the dopest work like you do!!

  • Kazuya7 days ago

    this is beautiful

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