The Chronicles of Red
She was the epitome of the colour Red
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Let me spill the tea π«
On a girl named Ruby π©π»βπ¦°
She painted her life Red β£οΈ
Through everything, she did daily π§£π π
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She was a delicate Rose πΉ
When they were in Love β€οΈ
In the end, she wilted π₯
By him, never watered βοΈ
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Volcanic Lava erupted about π
That matched her explosive Anger π‘
When she found out π©
He had been cheating on her π
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Her petals caught on Fire π₯
Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯
Phlebotomy her career π
The syringe wouldn't backfire π―
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She became the Devil from Hell πΉ
She bathed in his Blood π©Έ
After she injected cyanide π
Dismembered him before he died π«
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Comments (19)
Ruby scares me a bit! A woman scorned is frightful. But not so sure she should have bathed in that cyanide-tainted blood!
you could have become friends with edgar allen... makes me think twice when i give blood!
Wow!! Just wow!β€οΈππΉπ²π¦πππ§§ποΈπ§£πͺπ π’βοΈπ―π₯Red!
I love the use of emoji's and how dark/ twisted this feels! Great work D!
Shocking, this! I love it, Dharr, a startling, burning piece of revenge. The violence is top notch here, your rhyme even more so. I love: "Her petals caught on Fire π₯ Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯ Phlebotomy her career π The syringe wouldn't backfire π―" but rhyming "cyanide" with "before he died" = genius. (also, ouch!)
Ooo I love the extreme juxtaposition in this and the emojis really add to it, they're perfect! And I love you the dark twist at the end that you're infamous for too.
This was incredible! Thank you for sharing it with me β€οΈ
Ah the revenge of a seemingly delicate rose. Beautiful and brutal.
This woman got to do some of the things I have always thought about doing! With your grasp of the macabre, you could easily create a series better than Twilight Zone and Tales From the Crypt!
Well this was certainly dark and twisty Dharrsheena! I like the way she handled her heartbreak! Great work! β€οΈ
Damnnnn I feel the anger! Such an explosive piece! The emojis were a good peripheral representation of each line that I didnβt think Iβd like but did! π
Wow Dharrsheena! What would I do without my morning dose of your poetry. Not a good day ahead for me so thank you!! βHer petals caught on Fire π₯ Revenge her burning desire β€οΈβπ₯ Phlebotomy her career π The syringe wouldn't backfire π―β Perfect! Volcanic Lava erupted about π βThat matched her explosive Anger π‘β Reminds me when Iβm Bipolar Raging when Iβm unwell. Lookout anyone in my path. Thank goodness Iβm in hospital by then!! I loved this!!! My insights are glitching again. So I did heart. Before I get up and make breakfast I think Iβll need to quieten my own mind. Not because of your magnificent piece. Just the stressful day I have ahead. I go back regularly and Re read anothers of mine at this time βHedges; Mind talk. Have you read it. I have made a video at the end β¦ https://vocal.media/poets/hedges Or I read about when I first broke free No Ross: just myself. https://vocal.media/poets/no-ross-just-myself Thank you again for making my morning!!! Pauline πΈ
Seems fair π
talented.
Fantastic!!! The descriptive imagery is wow!!!
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You have such a lovely way with words no matter the subject matter or the length of the piece. This was fabulous!!
Beautifully written with a story-like feeling to it. Very vivid visually.
I agree with Kiki. It's a pleasure to meet. someone who's not only sweet but very neat.πYou expressed in but a few short words a whole story. As the saying goes, "an unintelligent person will use complex words to describe a simple situation. An intelligent person will use simple words to describe a complex situation." Well done my friend and all the best for the future.π
Neat!