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The Chronicles of Red

She was the epitome of the colour Red

By Dharrsheena Raja SegarranPublished 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Let me spill the tea πŸ«–

On a girl named Ruby πŸ‘©πŸ»β€πŸ¦°

She painted her life Red ❣️

Through everything, she did daily πŸ§£πŸ‘ πŸ’„

🍁

She was a delicate Rose 🌹

When they were in Love ❀️

In the end, she wilted πŸ₯€

By him, never watered ❌️

🍁

Volcanic Lava erupted about πŸŒ‹

That matched her explosive Anger 😑

When she found out 🚩

He had been cheating on her 🚘

🍁

Her petals caught on Fire πŸ”₯

Revenge her burning desire ❀️‍πŸ”₯

Phlebotomy her career πŸ’‰

The syringe wouldn't backfire πŸ’―

🍁

She became the Devil from Hell πŸ‘Ή

She bathed in his Blood 🩸

After she injected cyanide πŸ’‰

Dismembered him before he died 🚫

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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran

My mental health decline brought about a lot of darkness and I embraced it. It now flows out mostly as Dark Stories and Poetry.

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✨️Glitteringly Savage✨️
πŸ–€ Elegantly Disturbed Mind πŸ–€

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  • π‘πŒ π’π­π¨πœπ€π­π¨π§11 days ago

    Ruby scares me a bit! A woman scorned is frightful. But not so sure she should have bathed in that cyanide-tainted blood!

  • you could have become friends with edgar allen... makes me think twice when i give blood!

  • Denise E Lindquist5 months ago

    Wow!! Just wow!β€οΈπŸŽˆπŸŒΉπŸ˜²πŸ¦πŸ’ƒπŸŽ€πŸ§§πŸŽŸοΈπŸ§£πŸͺ­πŸ‘ πŸ‘’β›‘οΈπŸŽ―πŸ₯ŠRed!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    I love the use of emoji's and how dark/ twisted this feels! Great work D!

  • Mackenzie Davis7 months ago

    Shocking, this! I love it, Dharr, a startling, burning piece of revenge. The violence is top notch here, your rhyme even more so. I love: "Her petals caught on Fire πŸ”₯ Revenge her burning desire ❀️‍πŸ”₯ Phlebotomy her career πŸ’‰ The syringe wouldn't backfire πŸ’―" but rhyming "cyanide" with "before he died" = genius. (also, ouch!)

  • Poppy 7 months ago

    Ooo I love the extreme juxtaposition in this and the emojis really add to it, they're perfect! And I love you the dark twist at the end that you're infamous for too.

  • This was incredible! Thank you for sharing it with me ❀️

  • Rob Angeli8 months ago

    Ah the revenge of a seemingly delicate rose. Beautiful and brutal.

  • Veronica Coldiron8 months ago

    This woman got to do some of the things I have always thought about doing! With your grasp of the macabre, you could easily create a series better than Twilight Zone and Tales From the Crypt!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)9 months ago

    Well this was certainly dark and twisty Dharrsheena! I like the way she handled her heartbreak! Great work! ❀️

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    Damnnnn I feel the anger! Such an explosive piece! The emojis were a good peripheral representation of each line that I didn’t think I’d like but did! πŸ˜†

  • Pauline Fountain11 months ago

    Wow Dharrsheena! What would I do without my morning dose of your poetry. Not a good day ahead for me so thank you!! β€˜Her petals caught on Fire πŸ”₯ Revenge her burning desire ❀️‍πŸ”₯ Phlebotomy her career πŸ’‰ The syringe wouldn't backfire πŸ’―β€™ Perfect! Volcanic Lava erupted about πŸŒ‹ β€˜That matched her explosive Anger πŸ˜‘β€™ Reminds me when I’m Bipolar Raging when I’m unwell. Lookout anyone in my path. Thank goodness I’m in hospital by then!! I loved this!!! My insights are glitching again. So I did heart. Before I get up and make breakfast I think I’ll need to quieten my own mind. Not because of your magnificent piece. Just the stressful day I have ahead. I go back regularly and Re read anothers of mine at this time β€˜Hedges; Mind talk. Have you read it. I have made a video at the end … https://vocal.media/poets/hedges Or I read about when I first broke free No Ross: just myself. https://vocal.media/poets/no-ross-just-myself Thank you again for making my morning!!! Pauline 🌸

  • L.C. SchΓ€fer11 months ago

    Seems fair 😁

  • Ted Hauserabout a year ago

    talented.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fantastic!!! The descriptive imagery is wow!!!

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  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    You have such a lovely way with words no matter the subject matter or the length of the piece. This was fabulous!!

  • Denise Larkin2 years ago

    Beautifully written with a story-like feeling to it. Very vivid visually.

  • Russell Ormsby 2 years ago

    I agree with Kiki. It's a pleasure to meet. someone who's not only sweet but very neat.πŸ™‚You expressed in but a few short words a whole story. As the saying goes, "an unintelligent person will use complex words to describe a simple situation. An intelligent person will use simple words to describe a complex situation." Well done my friend and all the best for the future.πŸ‘

  • Kiki Le Tigre2 years ago

    Neat!

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