The Bus Stop
Forever Waiting...
This is my daily rite.
Will this bus ever show?
My toes are nearing frostbite.
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It is nowhere in sight.
Is this a banned borough?
This is my daily rite.
❄❄❄
I loathe this winter blight.
Standing knee deep in snow.
My toes are nearing frostbite.
❄❄❄
I‘ll be here until night.
Why is the bus so slow?
This is my daily rite.
❄❄❄
Blinded by the floodlight,
I should buy my own auto.
My toes are nearing frostbite.
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Might as well start a campsite.
The bus is a no show.
This is my daily rite.
My toes are nearing frostbite.
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This poem is a special dedication to Canadian winters and bus services.
May we all board safely and in a timely manner this winter season.
About the Creator
Haggar Ben
I love to dream and let my mind drift off into new worlds and characters.
With the use of this platform, I plan to practice the gift and artform of storytelling.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (6)
Funny villanelle!
Very clever poem!
Awesome villanelle! Very relatable story! Campsite twist was funny!
Lovely poem. Nice job :)
This is so good! Well done!
Great entry.