Stop The Silence!
Poems from my adolescent mind.
Proud feelings aborted again, dropped out of nowhere, where does it begin?
Choices are useless in this new realm of order. Response time is critical, it allows me to hope for more
Let thy tongue guide thy unrouted way. For without it, we would never have anything to say
Cry out loud to appease the ones who really care. They will help spread the syllables without you being aware
This internal noise must be set forth without deceptions. Releasing becomes pleasing and feelings direct the inflections
Time for the performance of your life. Look away from the scrutiny that makes you want to run and hide
Let it all out
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (10)
Nice Provocation♥️💯📝😉✌️
Very powerful sentiment. I often feel I bottle my thoughts up too much, but then again, I think a lot of them are pointless to say and possibly damaging. I think it's a wise lesson that you impart: "Cry out loud to appease the ones who really care. They will help spread the syllables without you being aware "This internal noise must be set forth without deceptions. Releasing becomes pleasing and feelings direct the inflections" Without people who really care, it is pointless to say anything to them at all. And truth must be directed by true feeling. How insightful and valuable to share! Thank you for this.
Oh yeah, this was a pep talk I needed to read! Let it all out! So perfect, Lamar! Glad Paul directed me here! 👏🏽💫💞
Loved the internal coaching & motivational chatter.
Let it all out! Short, but so much packed into this poem. Well done. Subscribed!
Let it all out! 👏🏼 So glad Paul shared this.
What a great piece, Lamar! You hit that feeling right on the head.
Wow! And that image just perfectly goes with the feeling of this!
Ooooo, this was so powerful! I loved it!
Love this one so much, Lamar! Very inspirational!