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Stop

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By Cathy holmesPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Stop!

just stop.

I love you,

you fool.

stop

love poems
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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • Carol Townend8 months ago

    Straight to the point. I love you too, you fool!!

  • C. H. Richard11 months ago

    Says so emotion in a short poem ❤️

  • Rob Angeli11 months ago

    Had to come revisit this concise little beauty. Sums up the strongest part of Love without any sticky sweet aftertaste. Everything in proportion. Bravo.

  • Antoinette L Brey11 months ago

    Very real- great message

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Short yet powerful! Awesome job, my friend!

  • Vanilla Loville 11 months ago

    You are very very talented

  • Vanilla Loville 11 months ago

    Nice way to word it.

  • I love you too, idiot! Lol! 🤣🤣🤣

  • Do you now? I mean, I know I'm a fool, but shouldn't we get to know one another a little better? (lol)

  • Colleen Millsteed 11 months ago

    Short and sweet with a powerful message.

  • Dana Stewart11 months ago

    To the point indeed. Nice work Cathy!

  • Jazzy 11 months ago

    So provoking with few letters and words! Great entry!

  • Heather Hubler11 months ago

    I loved the brevity and the increasing/decreasing form...whatever the hell the name is for that. Loved your STOP poem :)

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Love this!!! Simply sensational!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Donna Renee11 months ago

    Love it! A different take on the challenge for sure.

  • Clyde E. Dawkins11 months ago

    Short and sweet!!!

  • J. S. Wade11 months ago

    Make me think of … Stop!!! Don’t!!! Stop!!! Don’t!!!!!! Don’t Stop!!! 😂

  • Nice words

  • Test11 months ago

    I really really like this. Such a strong message in so few words. Well done!

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    I love the urgency of this. A strong entry, Cathy! Well done!

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    Now that was short and sweet! I scrolled up and down a second time in case I missed the rest (still trying to wake up.) Nice entry.

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    This a very strong message 🤗👌💃🏽💓

  • Ha,🤗❤️Tell em Cathy‼️

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