i’m swimming
within waters
my body rocks back
it rocks forth
sailing away
my body sways
intoxicated
i am not of this place
no longer a resident of your world
my soul has taken
new shape
new space
i am one with everything
evolving
surpassing
flying
floating
dying.
About the Creator
Alejandra Mora Hendler
Mother, wife & author. My poetry chapbooks and novella are on amazon. A free chapter of the novella is right here on vocal, and my new book Jasper & Sunny will be released here first one chapter at a time!
www.alejandramorahendler.com
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