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Spring Planting

Haiku

By Cathy holmesPublished 26 days ago 1 min read
photo by nikola-jovanovic-unsplash

If I plant a seed

I am guaranteed nothing

but a chance to dream

*

Should my seed take root

there’s no promise of fruit, but

hope in the blossom

*

I’ll feed my neighbour

with bountiful harvest and

spring blessings of rain

*

Should my crop be spoiled

it will still feed the squirrels

its purpose fulfilled

*

In unknown autumn

my only regret would be

not planting the seed

--

For the Queer Vocal Voices Spring poetry challenge:

nature poetryinspirationalHaikuGratitude

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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Comments (15)

  • Rachel S8 days ago

    Wow! Well put forth; message imparted in smoothe way!

  • A beautiful spring haiku collection

  • L.C. Schäfer18 days ago

    Lovely, the last stanza especially is outstanding

  • Donna Fox (HKB)24 days ago

    Beautiful springtime piece here Cathy!! Love this little collection of haikus!!

  • Christy Munson25 days ago

    Hopeful without expectation! Delightful Haikus! (Is there a name for Haikus strung together?) Loved it!

  • Lovely!

  • angela hepworth25 days ago

    What a lovely collection of haikus!!

  • Babs Iverson25 days ago

    Super nature poem!!! Loved it!!!

  • Hannah Moore25 days ago

    I was going to say that the first haiku was enough on its own, but then the last haiku was ALSO enough on its own, and the whole was bigger still.

  • Whoaaaa, this was so freakinf powerful! You nailed this!

  • ThatWriterWoman26 days ago

    You put such wonderful thought into each line Cathy. Outstanding work!

  • Caroline Craven26 days ago

    I am guaranteed nothing but a chance to dream. … what a phenomenal line. This is so beautiful.

  • Dana Crandell26 days ago

    A beautiful haiku, with a good helping of truth!

  • D.K. Shepard26 days ago

    Very fitting form choice! Love the hopefulness and purposeful waiting communicated with the planting of a seed! Not a fan of squirrels but clever line all the same!

  • Love the part of the spoiled crop feeding squirrels great haiku set

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